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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 12:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: LOLOLOL! No weights Wink

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 1:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, lee or guy was not my idea okay.

Name- Sagara Sonzo

Age-28

Personality-Gets disapointed a lot by his students, wishes they would grow up. Cares for them all the same and knows what it means to be on a team and to wor together.

Specielty-All Jutsu, Wind, Fire, Water, Earth, Lightning, can preform at least one jutsu of that type.

On a scale of one to ten

Ninjutsu-9/10

Genjutsu-7/10

Taijutsu-8/10

Talents-Can use any type of jutsu, draw back, over all amount of chakra isn't signifigant.

Looks-Green Konoha vest with black inder outfit. Headband worn normal. Scar on right cheek.

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 1:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Okay, so the pattern is piepie, Ink, wolf. Got it))

"Odango-chan, please refrain from scaring Kakashi-kun in the future." said a voice from within the clearing Chakra smoke. "Kakashi-kun, please do not aggravate Odango-chan with the nickname she despises, I won't step in again."

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"No one asked you to step in and I can take he-" Sakumo trailed off when he saw who was standing where the smoke disapeared. He adjusted the headband that was across his eye and just sat down.
"Why do you where your headband across your eye, Sakumo?" asked Hikaru.
"It's a long story and I don't want to tell it." he replied.
"Okay. Now that we're together, I would like us to make introductions. Starting with the young lady on the left. How about you?" Sagara asked as he turned towards her.
"I would rather go last if that's okay." Suki replied.
"Fine how about the kid with the white hair and stupid expression on his face?" Sagara asked. Sakumo, who had not been paying attention, didn't realize that Sagara was talking to him or that the group was staring at him.
"Ahem...I believe I was talking to you." Sagara said with frustration in his voice. Finally, Sakumo got his grip.
"What?"
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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

okay, I'll color code the character I'm expressing.

Sagara sighed, not the best start. "Fine, you, in the middle, start.

Hikaru looked at him, "My name is Hikaru Doshi. In truth, my life is not so special. My mother is a medical ninja, father a basic Chuunin who just aplied for a job at the academy. my younger brother just passed the exam at age 12, and here I sit, with only the wish to have myself known to this world. I'm tired of being a shadow no one reconizes, so my first step is to earn the respect of all of you."

Sakumo Just laughed at him for making that speach. "Like that would ever happen."

"Maybe not over night, but in time, in time."

"Okay, now you start, the comedian, as I know you. Show me why i should think other wise, because right now I have the most respect for Hikaru because he decided to speak."

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PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 1:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sakumo jumped rather guiltily under Sagara's piercing gaze, and then pointed at Suki. Silence reigned and Sagara sighed again.

"Okay, Odango-chan, you go." he snorted to himself.

Suki blinked at him, but said calmly,
"My name is Odango Suki, and I want to become one of the best medical-nins there are, enough to rival the Sannin Tsunade and save lives. I live with my Obaa-chan and nothing of true interest has happened in my life except recently when I was transferred, which was very odd, don't you think?" she asked of no one in general, twiddling her thumbs thoughtfully. "And Sagara-sensei is right for being exasperated," she added dreamily. "I apologize."

A somewhat startled silence filled the air at the end of her small speech.

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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Now it's your turn." Sagara said to Sakumo who was inanother daze.
"Fine. Fine. Well my name is Kakashi Sakumo. But call me me by my last name. My nickname is The White Fang. I don't want to talk about dreams or ambitions. I'm an orphan. My parents were killed by rogues. And that is pretty much all about me." Sakumo said as he was staring at the sky. Sagara was pretty flustered at the group. He basically concluded that he had to train a brain, a comedian, and a egotistical boy.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Very well, introdutions made. Now, the Chuunin exames are about three months away, I'm only your sensei until you pass, inless you fale," said Sagara.

Sakumo laughed, "Chuunin, simple."

"No, not really," said Hikaru looking at the trees. "I took it with my old team last time. Why do you think I'm here."

"Ha, so they passed but you didn't."

"Maybe, but i was as strong as the others. They don't just juge strength, but brians, where you seem to fail."

"That's enogh," said Sagara. "Our first mission begins in a half an hour. We must escort a young man back home. He has been the target of hired thugs, so it's a C ranked mission. Go and prepare!"

The students dash off.

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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 9:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"You know Kikaru. I can be just as smart as you. If anything I'm smarter." Sakumo replied to Kikaru's comment.
"Then prove it. Let's have a match right here and now to see whose the smartest and strongest is." Hikaru said as he stopped running. Sakumo stopped as well and the two of them started to stare at each other with burning hatred. Hikaru got into his fighting stance and Sakumo just stood there.
"Well? Are you in or out?" Hikaru asked.
"I'm still standing here aren't I?" Sakumo replied. He still just stood there. Hikaru ran at him and Sakumo stepped out of the way, grabbed Hikaru's hand, twisted it behind his back, and threw him into the ground. Hikaru was up like a flash and kicked Sakumo in the stomach and sent him flying. His headband flew off of his face and landed on the ground next to him. Sakumo looked up. His Sharingan glowed and started to spin.
"Fire Style! Fire Missle Bomb Technique!" Sakumo yelled as he made the sign of the Tiger.
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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2007 12:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A blast of force came between them, knocking them far in opposite directions.

"You should take it back, you're both idiots and you're both weaklings," said Suki shortly, holding Sakumo in a chicken-wing and Hikaru on the ground, her foot between his shoulder-blades holding his hands to his back.

"What the hell did you have to come here for?" snapped Sakumo, attempting to wrench his hand out of her grasp, but failing. (Holy ****, this woman has got a strong grip!)

"Sparring's not forbidden, but as your new teammate I have a responsibility to stop you from killing yourself!" replied Suki, voice just as full of acid. "That freakin' jutsu has a 40% Chakra absorption! You idiot, if you used that today, you'd be drained for the entire mission!"

A Chakra explosion signaled that Hikaru had used a substitution.

Sakumo, furious, spat out a bit of knowledge he'd gained the previous day, hanging around Ichiraku. "I see why your teammates abandoned you to the Shodai's decision! You're a interfering b*tch, and you mess around with everything that doesn't concern you! No wonder they filed a complaint, you have the brains of a odango bun yourself!!!"

Color drained from Suki's face faster then Sakumo thought possible, and the hand restraining his arms began to tremble, her grip crushing his wrists.
"Fine, then, you can do your sparring, get hurt and stop the team from EVER advancing, since that's what you obviously WANT!"

She flung him blindly away from her, displaying more of her inhuman strength. Sakumo landed against a tree twenty yards away, shock arrowing through his knees. Even with a steadied landing, it was impossible to cushion the force.

Suki vanished.

"Oh, brilliant, Sakumo." said Hikaru, landing next to him.

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2007 9:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"Don't start with me Hikaru! if it wasn't for her you'd be dead!" Sakumo stalked off and left Hikaru standing there with his mouth open. Sagara walked over and said,"You know, Sakumo doesn't know what he was doing. But what an impressive display. Impressive indeed. Hikaru go round them up. I need them here for the mission briefing now."
"Alright." Hikaru replied. He was thinking that the next time he saw Sakumo, that he would kill him. Still, he needed to follow orders. He ran off in the direction of Sakumo.
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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 8:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru landed infront of Sakumo, "So you think I would have dies?"

"No dout about it," he replied still walking.

"Don't under estimate an enemy. Rule one."

"You think you can lecture me!" Sakumo yelled turning around.

"Just because your powerful doen;t mean I would have died."

Frustrated, Sakumo charged at Hikaru. Hikaru grabed the on coming fist spun around and locked Sakumo.

"Rage wont help you."

"How did you do that?"

"Secret tiajutsu, Kamikaze strike."

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Sakumo grinned. "Like you said Hikaru, 'Don't underestemate your enemy'.
"Who said I was?"
"I just did." Sakumo disappered.
"I wonder where I am." Sakumo said in a mocking voice. He was no where to be found. Hikaru spun around in all directions looking for any hint of Sakumo.
"Is he up, down, left, or right?" Hikaru asked himself. A hand shot up from the ground and grabbed his ankle. It dragged him into the ground up to his neck. Sakumo pulled himself out of a nearby hole.
"I may speacialize in fire techniques but I know a few ground ones as well. See you later." Sakumo strode off with his hands in his pockets.
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Sagara rolled his eyes as he landed next to Hikaru's bodiless head.

"You're idiots," he declared, nudging Hikaru's head with his foot and glaring down exasperatedly. Hikaru sighed.

"Suki-chan went to you, didn't she?"

"Yeah, and I got the general impression that she wasn't too fussed about me saving Sakumo."

"Probably," agreed Hikaru. "Sensei, do you have a nulling technique for this? The earth is starting to hurt....badly."

"Simple substitution, just put the most force into your legs. I'm going to go round up the others- meet me at the Hokage's office."

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Sakumo was furious to the point of tears. He ran as fast as he could to get to his house. Once he reached it, he scoffed at the state of it. Dirty, smelly. but he didn't care. He just wanted to be alone. He threw open the front door and punched the wall. Blood oozed from the knuckles as he pulled his fist away. Why was he so different than everyone else? Why did they think he was stupid and a no body? He was just a normal ninja. Sakumo fell onto his bed and cried. He shoved his face into his pillow and let loose. Suki was running after Sakumo when she heard him crying in his house. She had a feeling she knew why. She slumped against the wall and just listened.
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