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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 3:58 am    Post subject: Of the Beatles, Cell Phones & Love Notes Reply with quote

I need a better title. I will admit that. But I came up with the idea for this one off the top of my head...I admit, it's mucho boring but it will get better.

VOTE FOR PEDRO

TheJournalPlace.home>VoteForPedro

Yeah…so this is my blog. Big whoop. But whoever you are probably wants to know who I am, blah blah blah.

Name: Johnathan Reynolds

Age: 12

School: Estherville Preperatory School for Boys

Interests: uhm…computers???? I am like so lame I’m not into anything…

So, there you have it. Me. Here at Estherville Prep. Here is some FAQ for you.

Q. Do I really care?

A. No! So John’s not going to answer any more questions.

Sorry, just really bored…and…really…sick Razz

Gotta Love the Beatles

JournalPlace.home>GottaLovetheBeatles

Gah. I’m in the infirmary, aka nurse’s office, suffering from the stupid virus going on. Some girl’s quote en quote “boyfriend” from EPB gave it to her through…u don’t want to know …and of course, it’s gotten around the whole school. Sorry if this isn’t very long. Typing it on my phone under a pillow…not cool.

Check back later. Or not. This is like…so…*yawn*

Vote For Pedro

TheJournalPlace.home>VoteForPedro

Life is boring. So yeah. Since this is supposed to be a journal, and I’m supposed to look like I’m doing homework so nobody gets after me for using the computer too much, here we go.

1st Period- Japanese. I have no idea why I’m taking this, and prolly will quit by next week. Been a month in to it…still can’t pronouce ‘Conichiwa’. Or spell it, for that matter.

2nd Period- Math. Yuck. ‘Nuff said.

3rd Period- History. Intercepted a note from Mike Kazki to Brad Pellard, bragging about how he made out with this girl from EPG…another huge yuckkkk.

4th Period- Science.Nothing.

Lunch- Bought a hot chocolate from the new café they have in the lunch room. Now I’m really, really hungry…

5th Period- Health. Nothing I can mention without blushing. YUCKKKKKKK

6th Period- Language Arts. We started reading a really boring book written by this guy-who-I-can’t-pronounce-his-name.

Seventh period isn’t even worth mentioning.

I’m prolly not even going to write anymore, my life is so blah. So don’t bother coming back.

Oh, btw- Here’s the note I intercepted. Something worth reading, at least.

did u hear about me+trina

who she

girl

duh but who??

not telling

was that y u were gone yesterday

ya y?

wondering

you…

i wut

did you kiss

y do u want to know

?

well ya…10 seconds oh yeah

As you can tell, they were really, really mad when I got it. But now I have blackmail material. Life is still blah, but there’s hope for me. And I’ll explain 10 seconds later. Gtg.


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 5:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I really don't know what to say. It's interesting and the form is original. If you go on with this thing i'd like to read it.
Interesting Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sam, you're so ORIGINAL!!!!!!!!! Gawd, I may have t copy ure whol sk8er theme and this new blog thingy Cool Your stuff really says a lot about you, Sam.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2005 11:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Like your other story (New Story) this sounded true.
This is an intresting format, I like it though, but its diffrent. Diffrent in a good way though. Although I have some critque:

When you are writing about the periods in school you use the word 'yucckkkk' too much. It got kind of old so it didn't sound so good.

But I really like this and hope to see more Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*cringes*

Sam, you have improved SO much...

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know. *muscle spasm*

It's quite scary...

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*nods* Quite...

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 4:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very original and well done! You made it sound quite real.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ACK! NO!

Snoink...Razz You made all these people read it and give me a bad name! IT'S A GOVERNMENT CONSPIRACY, I SAY!

Now if only I could figure out how to wipe this story from the face of the planet...

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, little Sammus! Don't you know? This is very good for your age...

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*pokes*


Grr...

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 12:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi sam...erm...this is...different. I can't say as it's my favorite thing you've ever written, but I have confidence that it will grow steadily better. And yeah...new title definately in order.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Misty Lynn wrote:
hi sam...erm...this is...different. I can't say as it's my favorite thing you've ever written, but I have confidence that it will grow steadily better. And yeah...new title definately in order.


I like the title - it's what made me read this. Wink

And this was written on Feb 25, 2005. She's improved quite a bit since then...

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have one thing to say about that: HELL YES! Razz

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 5:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

snoink: okaaaaaaaaaaay...sweet that you want to stand up for sam but...irrelevant. I know how amazing sam is, I'm just saying it didn't interest me much. my opinion.
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