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JCobsesed
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 Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:00 pm Post subject: Philosophy of the Dark a.k.a POD |
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Hey, I'm writing a novel, Philosophy of the Dark. Chances are you've seen it here, maybe you've even looked at it.
I am in desperate need of critiques, of which I really don't have any. It's a depressing fact. And I don't know if I should continue posting them because of the lack of replies. So, if you would like to read it, please, please do. |
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| Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 12:07 am Post subject: |
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I don't know you, but I looked in your portfolio and you've posted a lot of stuff. Have you critted other people?
You might try swapping crits or PMing people who offer them.
I'll see what I can do though. |
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JCobsesed
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| Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:55 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, I crit a lot of stuff. Mostly things that nobody have critted yet, if its a popular story, I tend not to reply to it, just because they have enough people doing that. It's the people who don't get replies I read. And I don't do poetry, I can't write poetry, so why would I crit it? And people who have continued stories and stuff, like books they're posting, and nobody's reading just because there's so much, I crit those too. So...yeah...
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| Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:58 am Post subject: |
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I'd be happy to look at some of your stuff and crit it to the best of my ability. The title is quite intriguing.
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| Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:53 am Post subject: |
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Thank you! I struggled with if for a while, wondering if it was to...cheesy goth or something. I'm glad to hear it's not! =D
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