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Memento Mori
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Age: 15
Joined: 18 Mar 2008
Posts: 106
Reviews: 36
Country: I reside in a world my imagination dragged me into.
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 Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:55 pm Post subject: |
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It's pretty good, just go a bit easy on the descriptions next time. I found them way too long, and they didn't leave much for my imagination.
Of course, this is just my opinion. Also, this is already quite good. You don't really need to change anything. |
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