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The Handkerchief
The Handkerchief

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Scenario: someone your character knows is in a relationship with a much older or otherwise entirely inappropriate man/woman and has been keeping it secret. Your character sees them together, but is hidden from view. What does he/she do?

Vape tried to hold himself back by flattening himself against the wall even more, right there in front of him his best friend was allowing herself to be slapped around by a man.
Slade's voice rose once again.
"You stuiped pig! I told you to wait for me!"
His next move took Vape's breath away, with a feirce snarl he brought his clenched fist into Jezz's stomache with a sickening thud.
Jezz crumpled to the ground, gasping for breath and coughing.
"I'm sorry.."
She mumbled when the air had returned and she could sit up, but it wasn't enough for Slade. He gave her a swift blow to the ribbs with one booted foot.
Vape had seen enough, with a yell he jumped from the shadows to crouch protectivly over Jezz. She was curled into a ball, blonde hair falling over her face, groaning in agony.
"LEAVE HER ALONE!"
He screamed, hoping to heaven his brother had heard, hoping they had waited to go to the tavern.
Slade gave a laugh, eyes unfocused as a result of the achohal, and spat at the two.
"No Vape.."
Came Jezz's whimper from the ground. Ignoring her, he let loose a feral snarl. Slade gave a booming laugh in answer then came at them.
"STOP!"
A voice commanded, luckly it was enough to make Slade come to a clumsy stand still and whirl around.
Two gaurds stood with arrows knocked and pointed at Slade, between the two stood Ramoth, with a grateful sigh Vape motioned for his brother to come over.
Ramoth's normally calm face twisted into anger when he saw Jezz, as the two solders escorted Slade from the scene Vape brushed Jezz's lobg hair from her face.
Both boys gasped at what they saw, her face, normally so strong and beautiful looking was bruised and battered and twisted into a face that looked as though she had been trampled.
Vape gave another snarl.
"He's gonna pay..."


Scenario:Your character likes a close friend, how would he/she go about telling them?

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I did this before I came up with my plotline so this never happened. I just thought up a random name...
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Christine walked up slowly shuffeling her ripped up flats on the floor. Mentally she slapped her self. What the hell was she doing. This was Rei for crying out loud! They had know eachother since sixth grade when Christine had dropped her favorite bamboo pen and he had called some thing out like; "Hey, uhhh dude you dropped your pen. Nice design by the way. Im pretty interested in china myself." And they hit it off. Both interested in CHina and its cultures and history, both sarcastic children left alone by their parents a bit too often for their own good. Into reading vampire fantasy so much that fantasy had become their reality. Some one could easily have told them vampires were real and they would have beleived them instataniously. And all too soon, in all her acid washed skiny jean glory, Christine was at his locker.
"Hey Chrisitne. Have you finished The Historian. I only have like 15 pages left."
"Done already looser. But Rei. . .you know how in bloodline, Qunicy and Lucy. . .they were friends before Lucy realised how crazily in love she was?"
"Ya I know Chris. Why are you bringing up Quincy? Wait, let me guess!! You found him, here at this school, but he is passing himself off as a new senior." At this Christine let out her snort of a laugh.
"No, if I found the Quincy Harker I would be too busy drooling over him to come talk to some screw-ball like your self."
"Dang. I had hoped you found him."
"Back on subject, you get the concept of best friends falling in love right?"
"Right."
"Well Rei. . ." and the bell rang. A quick shoulder-squeeze hug and a two way 'see ya later'. Chrisitne was back walking to AP English. THis whole thing was so stupid. It's Rei for god sakes.

Scenario: Your charecter has been dating an amazing person for nearly four years. Right when he/she thinks that marridge is right around the corner when the person breaks up with them. Only a few days later this same 'amazing' person is seen with a close friend, talking in quiet tones and laughing, fingers linked.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm in kind of a lazy mood so I'm not going to write out the whole scene.

Tori would be crushed. She leans on her friends for everything and trusts them more than anything. The breaking up with the perfect person would be one thing, she wouldn't be able to get over that for ages and she would lean on her best friends for support, but if she saw her best friend with the guy she would accuse them of being a traitor and would be incredibly angry with them. It could turn into the loss of a friendship.
Amy would be upset. Like Tori, she leans on her friends for support when times get rough but usually she's the one that is getting leaned on. Amy isn't one for the drama so she wouldn't confront the person right then and there, she would wait for a time to talk to her friend on her own. She wouldn't bother confronting the ex.


Scenario: Your character finds out that one of their best friends has just taken up cutting. What would they do?

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