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It sounds like some sort of Sci-Fi, strange enough to catch my attention. It seems a bit bland, but I would pick it up 
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| Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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A crime novel. Or a drama of some description.
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:46 am Post subject: |
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Definetly an action book, almost Jakie-Chan-like. I wouldn't read it, I'm not a fan of those.
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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Seems like it would be a war novel, or perhaps horror, but it definitely evokes action-type thriller images. I quite like it!
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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For some reason it makes me think either fantasy, or something Egyptian. Either way, I would pick it up and see what it's about, if it's fantasy, I probably wouldn't read it. Egyptian on the other hand... =D
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Sounds like a dramatic action book, but unless it's a autobiography of Satan, I wouldn't read it because it sounds sacriligous.
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| Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:37 am Post subject: |
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Sounds like something about a ship?
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| Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 7:29 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds like a horror or something about ghosts. Could even be a tragedy thing. I've read too many of those books though, so I might not pick it up. I guess it would depend on the summary or the cover art.
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| Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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I might buy it, that is if a blurb was interesting. The tittle would urge me to at least look at it, though.
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| Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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I once tried to write a novel and its working title was Highest Degree, because of this quote I found on the web:
"The degree of ignorance and predjuice against deaf culture is unusually high."
I have a couple of suggestions:
Underline your most powerful phrases and try them out as titles
Try to find the main theme in the novel and pick something related to that (like I did, a quote)
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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Deafwriter, you're supposed to rate the title above you and post one of your own for the next person to rate.
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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"Scavenger" def sounds like a thriller. I like one-word titles!
"At the End of the Rainbow" seems fairytale-like and sentimental. Or is that the point?
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| Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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The remarks of a sarcastic girl on how she views the world? Probably read the back for more information.
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