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Needles and Roses - Chap. 8
Needles and Roses - Chap. 8

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I get what you mean. I'm unsure of my WHOLE ending though and of a large part of my plot, kind of...I'm sure I could fix a good part of it but it still irritates me, I don't know what I'm going to do... Maybe I'll just write it during Nano and the ending will come to me? Doubt it!

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I get what you mean. I'm unsure of my WHOLE ending though and of a large part of my plot, kind of...I'm sure I could fix a good part of it but it still irritates me, I don't know what I'm going to do... Maybe I'll just write it during Nano and the ending will come to me? Doubt it!



Well, on the bright side...if an ending doesn't come you'll just have to keep writing, in which case you'll be bound to get 50,000 words. ^_~

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aye. I've basically given up on figuring out my ending. XD I'm hoping intensely that it will come to me in the end rush of NaNo.

Oh, wow. Does everyone realize that it's the eighteenth? That's, what, thirteen days left? Thirteen! Under two weeks! *Dies*

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hah! oh gosh. I'm scared..... WHAT IF MY PLOT HAS NO ENDING!??!?!?! That would be mean to the reader. I hate books with 'to be continued's at the very end!

*fights with self because Nano is controlling and painful yet enjoyable*

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm, I think I'll have to give this one a shot. I don't know if I can do it, but it will be worth the effort.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I've just signed up.

I have no idea at all what I'm going to write (no, not even a genre), and can't be bothered to even think about it right now. So, in short, no - I'm no where near ready Cool.

It's probably a good thing that I enjoy impulsive writing - although by the end, my novel probably won't make any sense, but what the hell Wink.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you have two weeks....better hurry!

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I still haven't done any planning yet. I probably should now that I think about it. I just don't have any TIME!!! Arg....

But now I am devoted to creating a character about my friend Ian who got killed yesterday in a car accident. He was a such a crazy and positive person. So friendly too. He always knew just what to say. He should be a fun character to recreate. It'll be hard though. *sigh* I'm determined though. Smile

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I'm sorry, yoha. But he sounds like he will indeed make a good character. Smile

And...I've just about given up on outlining. Letting it all just come out in the writing from chapter eleven and on...

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

awww but you could always outline with me, cass Very Happy

i have to outline XD Im crazy like that.

Sorry about your friend, I'm sure they'd love the dedication you are showing to them.

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Elelel: What kind of solo? instrument, or singing?


Instrumental. I play the clarinet.

Hey! If I run out of plot I can just have a character have to do a major performance on an instrument and spent 5000 or so words panicking about it!

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Now it's the 19th! AND I DON'T HAVE A PLOT!!! *major panickage*

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 10:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All this about endings! It took me about five minutes to work out my ending. Ooh, it's climatic ...

Anyway, my main plot problems are with the inbetweens, the sub-plots -- I have general points where cool stuff happens, but I'm not always sure how to write to get to those points.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 11:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I was worrying about the ending...

But I decided last night that I'll come up with it as I go, hoping the hype of my rising climax will bring a good show! (Did I just rhyme?)

This whole nano thing, its tough...I hope I actually finish it.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 11:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh man oh man oh man!
I stupidly started a bleach fanfic two weeks ago (why? WHY?) And now I have to finish it before I start planning in depth or I'll never get anything done! *starts twitching*

I need to embark on a journey for a plot... Or at least for a clean empty head.

Twelve days to finish one thinga nd plan the next... Ak!

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Ha ha... I had my ending before my beginning! I think I'm just crazy like that.

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