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Mr.Perfect, Chapter 4
Mr.Perfect, Chapter 4

by omsvmars22 in Romantic Fiction
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wrote a couple of paragraphs for the next chapter, so expect an update this week ... maybe.

Someone dies! Who will it be?

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 5:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dude it's totally me. You're mad cuz you die later in mine Razz

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dude. this is amazingly amazing. I'm loving it too much to be a (in the words of Mesh) Crazy-editor.

I am assuming I will be mentioned in it too? If so I would love to find out what I am.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You are Sab! *looks up details* You're a Sergeant in Fox Company.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is great Jack! Can't believe I only just found it... that's what I get for just looking at the posts from after I last logged in. Wink

Hehe, and I'm a sergeant! Um... I have absolutely no idea how ranks work or anything, but it sounds good.

*waits for next installment*

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 6:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*has been waiting for far too long*

*shakes fist angrily*

Hurry up, damn you! I hvae no patience, gaaaaarhh I just want to bite someone in the face! But ... that would have nothing to do with your stalling. No, absolutely not.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I will not be held responsible for someone being bitten in the face.

Anyway, I might do some next week or today ... maybe. But I always say that.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm....Nice. My first fanfic reading and well...I'm a little lost as to whats actually happening.

*checks back* yay, I'm a private XD ...somewhere.

Keep it up, and post! I want to know what happens next!

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