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I thought it was good, I like the way you introduced a completely new character to the HP world, who, by the way, really is a nasty piece of work!
The only thing that I thought was a little odd was the fact that these characters were in school in, what, the 60s/70s, and you were comparing Jennifer Anniston to Courtney Cox...? Not that it really matters, I'm just picky that way!
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:06 pm Post subject: Ha ha!! |
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| Really good!! I found both second and third parts the more readable, they seemed more interesting and funny!! It's fun to twist things from the books, as if they're in a whole different reality, as we know sirius really isn't gay!! It makes you wonder what would have happened had he really been like that...?? Very interesting take on a great story!! I'm just rambling on at the mo, but very good!! |
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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Personally, I like it the way it is. It's sort of an awkward and sharp twist but just because that wasn't what I was expecting.
I do think Sirius and Angie should end up together but after Sirius ... sexual exploration is complete. That is simply because they're personalities don't exactly fit and I like to match up the mismatching. 
Good job.
*Gets out her magical crystal ball:* Do I see a sequel in the future? Most definately. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 2:02 am Post subject: |
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Yey an uppie!
“Who was kissing? Who , Cell?”
“Remus and…and Sirius!” AHHHHHHHHHH! You take the two hottest guys in HP and take them both away from us!?!?! Dude. I think they're playing a joke on Angie. Muah ahahahaha
“Wait!” She called and ran over and put on some lippie and a bit of mascara. She shrugged at me, “Ya never know…” Haha. That's a good line.
He's...really...gay?!?!? But...he's so...hot...and...awesome...and...*Cries*
Good writing and really funny!! Is it over or are you updating again?
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| Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 11:52 pm Post subject: |
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GibsonGirl: Hahaha, yes poofy things do rock =)
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I have an idea about a sequel...muahahaha!! Actually, I've got a few in mind.
Jack Shepherd is Gay (yay Jack/Locke)
And another one that I might not want to post on here...you never know who reads these boards. I'll tell you tomorrow. |
Wooot! What is it?
Kazsmurf: Thank you for reading! You've got a good point about the Courtney Cox/ Jennifer Aniston thing... I'm not really sure of any popular idols from back then with the same qualities... Hmm, research time. Haha.
VampX13: Mhmm, I see what you mean. I really wasn't planning on this ending. It really wasn't what I had planned... Aw well.
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| *Gets out her magical crystal ball:* Do I see a sequel in the future? Most definately. |
*Dances* Yay!
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| AHHHHHHHHHH! You take the two hottest guys in HP and take them both away from us!?!?! Dude. I think they're playing a joke on Angie. Muah ahahahaha |
Haha...That'd be funny.
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He's...really...gay?!?!? But...he's so...hot...and...awesome...and...*Cries*
Good writing and really funny!! Is it over or are you updating again?
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Yep. Really gay. Hehe, surprising I know... Thanks! I don't think I'm going to update again. I might do a sequel thing in someone elses perspective. Hmm...
And I'm scared of Mr. D's sketchiness too. Wayyy too strange. |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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lol, that was great. I'm with Lost though, you can't take the two coolest characters away like that!!!!! I'm glad Remus isn't gay though  I like the way Angie is turning out, she's an interesting character. Can't wait to keep reading! |
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:08 pm Post subject: |
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Maggie! I love how Sirius really is gay! Even though he is hot... But I couldn't have him anyway, so it's ok. But how sad! He finally gets up the courage to kiss Remus and Remus just.... dissed him completely! Bad Remus! HOW DARE YOU BE STRAIGHT!!!! AUUGGHHH If Remus and Sirius were real people, I would totally have crushes on them. (And obviously not want them to be gay). But since they're not real.... THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER! Sorry I just really like that ship. Ok deep breath in, deep breath out.
Anyway.... Cute story! Funny ending. Some parts kind of skipped around randomly. Like, storylines that start and then never come back. For example, who signed the planted "love letter"? We need more information.
And sequelwise, YES! You can't just end it like this! Poor Sirius! Maybe he and Remus can kiss and make up! *wink* *wink* I like how this story, instead of from the traditional Remus or Sirius POV, is from an uncanon character. Interesting spin....More please!
Julia
PS I’m not a bloody poofter! I love that line
PPS Emily, thanks (about the avatar from a wicked long time ago)
PPS Emily, I think we need one called Alex Karev Is Gay, am I right??? |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 12:46 am Post subject: |
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| wasitadream? wrote: |
PPS Emily, thanks (about the avatar from a wicked long time ago)
PPS Emily, I think we need one called Alex Karev Is Gay, am I right??? |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes, we so do. And you're welcome! |
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| GibsonGirl, I totally agree, Sirius is SO HOT. Any who, Hilarious story, I was drinking a vitamin water during reading and it came out of my nose several times... |
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