Awesome! Though, I think the lines were a bit too short. Other than that, wonderful! Keep writing! You did fantastic with the detail and imagination.

Wow, that's very sweet. It reminds me of the book The Giving Tree. I hope I hear more from you!

Good Poetry is more creative and takes more work to make beauty. Emo Poetry is just a simple "bleh".

It's more then just art,
it comes from the heart

That whole thing was beautiful! I loved it a lot, but when I read the ending, I almost cried because it was amazing!

I was looking on google.com for a good website where you can show your work and people can review it, and this came up!

Hey, my names Emily!



I liked all the imagery and detail. Your persepctive of it made it exciting! I hope to hear more from you! ^^

Great! But maybe add more, like what everything looks like, and take a bit more time. Other than that, I like it a lot! I hope you keep writing, I want to here more.

Hiya! I'm new too, and I hope you have a great time and get good feedback on your writing.

And don't worry about mean critics that might be picky, just as long as you like your writing, it's great.

I liked your perspective of it, but it needed a bit more, but I do hope you continue to write more of these great poems. I'll give it a Like, but a bit more detail. Hope to see more from you!

Great job! I like how you showed your point of view within the poem. It really makes me wonder about what you said now... keep writing!

Haha, I love it! You did an amazing job with the perspective of the poem. I hope you continue to write.

Nice detail too.

Very interesting... I liked it a lot! I don't have much to say... but I do hope you write a lot.

Haha, cute! I like all the dialogue a lot.

Nicely done! It really makes me able to imagine all the detail. Hope you continue to write.

I like it a lot. Maybe break it up a bit more but wonderful anyway! I hope you continue to write, because this was a fantastic poem.