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Young Writers Society


PKMichelle


About PKMichelle

I'm not the greatest writer. I'm actually very inconsistent. But I wanted to try getting my work out there to someone, and this is it.

I mostly write horrors and thrillers, and I'm definitely looking for some feedback on both. As a young writer, I always appreciate some advice and/or guidance, and I am always looking for ways to improve my writing!

Writer's Block Combat Pad - This is for me to remember, but you can use it too!! thanks, avianwings47!!!

Spoiler! :
This is the review template I use. It's also for me because I hate going on a scavenger hunt to try and find an unedited version... anyone's free to use it or change it as they please :D

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[color=darkviolet][b]Hello, friend![/b][/color]
I saw your work in the Green Room and figured I’d check it out!

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[color=mediumblue][b]Per my interpretation,[/b][/color]


[color=red][b]If I could offer any sort of advice,[/b][/color]

But, obviously, this is just a suggestion, and it's always up to the writer, so please take this criticism lightly and know that I mean nothing negative by it—only trying to provide a somewhat useful critique.


[color=limegreen][b]If I had to pick my favorite part,[/b][/color]


[color=darkorange][b]Overall,[/b][/color]

Thank you for taking the time to write and post this, and I hope this review is of some use to you!


[color=deeppink][b]Goodbye for now! I hope you have a magnificent day (or night) wherever you are![/b][/color]


Pronouns: she/her


Occupation

unemployed


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy