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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 7:18 pm    Post subject: Dyslexia Reply with quote


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The writing looks kind of sloppy and the comment is kind of random.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do you have a problem with random?
You have a problem with my handwriting!
Want me to fix it?

[sarcasm]I have problem with your post!
Fix it![/sarcasm]

It may be random for you but it certainly wasnt random for me.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.... :-s i dont get it.... 8-[

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dyslexia makes "b"'s look like "p"s because of their problem.
now take it literally, it makes "bees" look like "peas"

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh, #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o #-o :frosty:



i fell dumb..... good picture, funny looks quickly done, andthe handwriting is better than mine........ so its fine i can read it so im ok with it, the hair is a little weird tho

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You didn't convey that those were peas and that they were buzzing well enough for people to get the joke. I thought they were sick bubbles or something. Just because something is round and green doesn't mean everyone know's it's a pea.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

But you read the "b's look like p's" right?
If that werent there Id agree with you.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you don't get the connection, it doesn't matter. Not everyone thinks the same way, so you have to make sure that different people will get it. You have to make the peas obviously peas and the buzzing obviously buzzing.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 5:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

b's look like b's? Wait, no. Oh, I'm so dyslexic.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 6:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*grins* Once you explained that, I literally laughed out loud. Nice.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HAHAHA! I got it right off the bat. I thought it was funny... you just have to be a little insane to get it. Hehehe... Smile Good job. I think the speed of it makes it more funny, just the fact that it's practically scribbled down. *claps with a childish grin* Yay! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe if there was a hive nearby or something it would be more obvious to people that they are meant to be bees? All the same, nicely done Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 9:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now that I look at it, I think I must have just been asleep when I saw it. LOL

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, that was very sporadic.

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