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A song I wrote
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 Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 1:30 am Post subject: A song I wrote |
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I hope this fits into this section. I'm so new to this site! Anyways, I hope u like it!!
"For Losing You"
By Me
I woke up today
I sat there and prayed,
for the moon to fall and sun to shine again
After all that one could take,
no wonder this heartbreak
Slowly ate away at me inside
Oh, I don't see how I still live
And I cant find my mind
For losing you
My soul left my body
For losing you
My heart slowly shattered
For losing you
Now I scream and I shout
I'm always filled with doubt
And my world keeps on spinning
For losing you
At first I thought we could have allot
Never suspecting our world to tumble
But then came those words and,
we were through
I never meant that much to you
My soul left my body
For losing you
My heart slowly shattered
For losing you
Now I scream and I shout
I'm always filled with doubt
And my world keeps on spinning
For losing you
Now that all that's through, I Realized I don't need you
I know I don't need to life my life with the same damned thing
But thinking back at the times we shared, i know now that there was something there
And now I truly hate
I hate myself for loosing you
My soul left my body
For losing you
My heart slowly shattered
For losing you
Now I scream and I shout
I'm always filled with doubt
And my world keeps on spinning
For losing you |
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| I hope this fits into this section. |
Strike one! It goes in the 'Lyrics' section.
But never fear: the ever-attentive mods will soon by on hand to move it. |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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Ok, I'm not a moderator over the Lyric Poetry section but it hadn't been done yet sooo I hope the mods over that section won't mind.
Anyway, very nice song...rather Ashlee Simpson/Carrie Underwood/Kelly Clarkson like. And by your icon I'm pretty sure you wouldn't mind that. |
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