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 Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 4:35 am Post subject: 2 Arts! |
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Gramma go bye bye.
Orks no draw me this time!
But yeah... no orks! Surprise!
Girl!
Other Girl!
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| Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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It took me a little while to realise what I was looking at on the first picture (although now it's easy to see).
On the second pic, the wing kind of looks like it at an odd angle to her body.
Other than that though, nice pics  . |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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Very cool!  Do i see the word Ska? My dad is obsessed with Ska music... |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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| I really like the first one, she seams so...Happy! The second one is a wee bit creepy though. |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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what instrument is the first girl playing, my guess is a trumpet, it's really good
the second one is just freaky  |
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 5:48 am Post subject: |
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Those are both really cool!
The first one cause it's all happy and and... Happy!
And the second cause it's creepy and strange.
Awesome! |
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| Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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| Those are both really good! but the first one was kind of hard to unterstand what it was. Maybe clean it up a bit. |
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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| The second picture = scares me, but I love the first one! |
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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NO ORKS?
*stifles a cheer*
Like the first one... it looks like she has a hula hoop of music. And the harpy also looks neato... though slightly creepy. Then again, DUDE. It's a harpy!
*resists urge to correct gramma... er... grammar* |
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| Thread rezzers! Thread rezzers! Off with their heads! |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 6:54 pm Post subject: |
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I like the first one, but I prefer a drawing that is quite clear, and not 'sketchy' with loadsa lines.
One things I have to say: the second 'girl' is more like some hag/bat creature. She looks, to put it in a nutshell...
completely DEMENTED!
And that stoic expression. Maybe you could just play about and give her rabies. Would add to the effect. |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:19 am Post subject: |
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Wow, seriously very good! Of course, I'm going to point out some knit picky things for you ^.~
First piccie: I love the shading you've done here, very good. Kudos to you! But, this really bothers me...The way her hands are on the trumpet is wrong. No trumpeter would hold a trumpet like that (total band nerd here) I know it's probly difficult to draw it proper, but I thought I'd at least point it out to you, even if you knew it wasn't right. I had to say it! I'm sorry! Anways...Also, I think her proportions are wrong. I THINK that I see a belly button, when it should really be down lower. And there are lines by her crotch that just look funny o.O I'm not sure if they're supposed to be creases in the pants, but it looks like her crotch is vomiting or something o.o I think the lines should be smoothed out a bit more or something. Also, her boobs look kinda saggy...just knit picky things. Overall it's got some real feeling shown there, and great shading! Honestly, your shading deserves many cookies!!!!
Second piccie: I'd first like to say that I think I found a mushroom face in the wing o.o I don't know if you did that on purpose...but I like it XD It's really creative, with the sitting position and the fact that it's um...I don't really know what it is...but the wing isn't positioned right with the body. It should be turned a little more so we get less of the front. If you like to draw wings and such, you can always find an art book that has things like that that tell you where the wings sprout from the back and stuff like that. It could help you with perspective. Otherwise, yeah, I like it ^.^
For some reason I want you to draw me a mushroom o.o...I don't suppose I can make a request for you to do so? haha, pm me if you would be willing to ^.^
*gives you a plate of cookies* Weee!!!!
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| Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:51 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh great!
I love them both, and your style is very unique--me likes I'm not sure what the ring is at the bottom of the first one, is it a mistake? It looks cool anyway, just don't know what it is! The second one is great, and I am in love with the eyes. I don't know what it is but the madness just makes me want it!
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| Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:21 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, the first one is sooooo pretty! i love the movement and music notes! It makes you want to hear what beautiful song she is playing!
The second one, well.... to be frank, it. is. creepy.
good imagination though!!!! |
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