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The Pink Boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:35 am

Hey, Pink here. Need a review?

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*Action/adventure
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*Romantic Fiction
*Science Fiction
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*Art
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Note: I will review chapters but you must provide me with a brief description of what has taken place, since I don't really want to go back and reread like thirty chapters so I can properly review one. (Don't go overboard, just a few sentences so I know what's going on.)

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*Historical Fiction
*Non-Fiction
*poetry (Argh, just can't do it!)

Note:If you really want a review for one of the above, I'll do my best to provide the best review I can give you.

I will not do Advanced Critiques, sorry.

[I really don't care what it's rated, unless it contains extreme violence and/or graphic sex.]

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Title and genre!
Provide a link please!
Also, one piece per person per post. :wink:



Alright, that's all for now!
Post y'all!


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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby Fruits_Basket99Tohru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:47 am

Hi Pink, this is Fruit! :D I'm so happy to find someone who will gladly review FanFiction! :) So could you please review my 1st story? Pretty please? (xD)

Here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=54552; it
's called SSBB New Adventure Story FanFiction. It's based on the Super Smash Bros. Brawl (SSBB) game for Wii, so I would like to know if you could still understand the story even if you haven't heard of SSBB before.

Also, nit-picks are fine, and if you know about SSBB and its Adventure Mode, I want to know how you think I did on that aspect as well. Thank you in advance! :smt001 :smt002
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:23 am

Fruits-Done.

Anyone else? =D
I do provide exquisite cookies...
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby Mo. on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:48 am

Hey Pink! Can you review my drawing? Here's the link:

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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:34 pm

Mo.-Done

Anyone else need a review? :D
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:24 pm

Anybody?
Please :)
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby Rascalover on Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:17 am

Romantic fiction: Let Me Love You

this is chapter 12

Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.

link: topic54963.html

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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby KikiSaysRAWR! on Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:26 pm

Here is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on. Here is the link topic54952.html It's a fantasy piece.
House: People interest me. Conversations don't.
Foreman: Maybe because conversations go both ways.
House & Foreman: Like Thirteen.
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Fri Nov 27, 2009 10:54 pm

Rascalover-Done.

I enjoyed your story, I might just go back and read the beginning if I have the chance.
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Sat Nov 28, 2009 7:19 am

KikiSaysRAWR!-Done.

Whoo!
Anyone else?

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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby *coco on Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:31 pm

Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html (chapter 1)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53746.html (chapter 2)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53800.html (chapter 3)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53888.html (chapter 4)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54024.html (chapter 5)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54589.html (chapter 6)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic55095.html (chapter 7)

Thanks so much!
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:08 am

Hi *coco
You've got a long list there so I can't promise you I'll finish it fast. But I will review them, just give me some time =]
I'll continue to edit this post as I finish reviewing your chapters.

Chapters
One: *reviewed
Two: *reviewed
Three:*reviewed
Four:*reviewed
Five:*reviewed
Six:*reviewed
Seven:*reviewed

-meanwhile, I'll still be taking other reviews.
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby anima9 on Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:17 am

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2!

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby PinkShearwater on Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:29 am

anima9-Done.

Anyone else??? I'm free!
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Re: The Pink boutique

Postby leeanna13097 on Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:52 am

I have a story called Written in Blood! It's romance fiction (though the prologue doesn't exactly have love in it). I'd REALLY love it if you would review it. Here's the link --> topic55433.html

BTW, it's just the prologue, so it doesn't exactly tell you what the story is ACTUALLY about; it just kind of gives you a glimpse of the past. One day soon I'll get the first chapter up, though!

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