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He Comes Before Night : Chapter One
He Comes Before Night : Chapter One

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 3:35 am    Post subject: Ben Reply with quote

What happened to the arcades?



We left Anatomy horny and entered Chemistry sterile,

we swapped vials by day and needles by night, we

got drunk at night and high in the wee hours of the

morning, we lost our innocence when we were seven

and came to appreciate Barney at fourteen, we went

to bed in tears and woke up with [fake] smiles,



because..



because...



it was never supposed to be this way,

we never wanted to be alone, and in our

desperate clawing and biting, we are

dying to know where the fucking arcades went.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You write so much about memories and the past. But it's a good thing though. You do it without necessarily being cheesy.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heh this was very nice.
Barney Lover!
[scratch that and bring me chips]

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