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This thread was created on September 20, 2008
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Forever always
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Reyu
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 Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 11:07 am Post subject: Forever always |
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I may never bring you flowers,
I rather grow them for you.
Any ones you like all I want is your delight.
That smile that has conquered me,
more surely than a note on key.
I knew it then and I know it now,
I'm always blamed when questioned how -
I could be a freak.
I want to hear you play.
I hope you will play for me.
Zyanya. |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:48 am Post subject: |
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| I like this poem...it's short, but I think that's okay becuase it's just really simple and sweet...nice job. |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 1:25 pm Post subject: :) |
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aww this poem was so sweet! i would definately be happy if someone i loved sent me this lol, it was short but sweet, and the best poems are always that  |
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