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tdownes
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 Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:49 am Post subject: Notorious Dragon... |
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You will hear more from me on this forum, unless otherwise, and then ne'er would I post here again.
This is a very evil character from one of my novels that has not actually been written yet... [but, obviously, I plan to]
This must have taken me, oh... about forty-five minutes, I think
[sorry for the awkward size of the picture, people] No fear. A link is here:
http://sky-lily2.deviantart.com/art/He-Who-Conquers-Wins-97100608
It really isn't my best, though...
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Sportgurl46
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| Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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wow  this is really good i only have a few things:
1) if you could try and bring the size down then this would be easier to review.
2) if you could try shading this more then it would make it look even more amazing
3) i love the whole dragon with a ball thing my dad used to make them and i have always loved them
4) if you wouldn't have told me that this was an evil character than i would have never guessed it. try making the eyes more narrow. that will make him look evil.
i like that you made him because of a book that you are going to write i always like to see how the authors see their characters all in all this is an amazing drawing and you have a lot of talent if you have any questions about my critique please pm me
hope this helps
happy drawing |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:00 am Post subject: |
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Thank you much, Sportgurl46
Yes, about the size, I re-scaled it and everything, but when I attached it,it really didn't seem any smaller...
This actually is a very darkly shaded picture, but the scanner faded it... [stupid scanner..]
And yes, that 'ball thing' is a vital object in my story. It's an orb, but I won't go on otherwise I will ruin the story. 
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:29 pm Post subject: |
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Wondrous, Thea. Marvelous! Too big, though --- maybe you should get your dad to help with that.
Do put that blue one up, though! |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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OMG this is awesome!! O.O I lurve dragons, and you've made me both amazed and absolutely jealous of your skill with this pic. XD It's marvelous. I love everything about it...but the size does make it hard to review, so I can't really tell you if anything's wrong with it (which if I find something I will, because I too love to draw dragons--I just can't do it as well as you can. ^_^; ).
Beautiful work! I wanna see more. |
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