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Our slogan?
Fish; she may be slow but she gets the job done
Anyhoo, tinny fish here reporting for duty! If you want a critique from me, then this is the place to ask! It may sometimes take me a while to get around to it, but even if it takes me a while I can promise it will get done.
Of course, I do try to get things done in good time 
will critique
Most fiction, fan-fiction depending on if I know the topic, non-fiction if anyone really wants me to. I can take a peek at art but don't expect a great deal.
If there's anything you'd like me to specifically look at just let me know, otherwise I'll just ramble on in the typical way that I normally do ^^
can't critique
Keep me away from romance and historical fiction or I'll simply fail. I really can't do poetry or lyrical things--sorry!
maximum number of requests
Only three at a time please, because I can be terribly slow when I get distraced by things XD
in return?
A thank you is pretty much all I'd like ;D and a hello now and again if it ever takes your fancy. Oh, and if you like the critique, do let me know so I can stick up a few examples
So, just leave a link and I'll get to work!
to do list:
I are empty 
done list:
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| http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32723.html this great big lazy thing needs something, because I'm failing at writing the 3rd part, a response might wake me up ^^ |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33373.html
Okay, the newly edited first chapter to my supernatural novel. |
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