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a little help, if you will?
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salsashanno
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 Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:15 am Post subject: a little help, if you will? |
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Hey, everyone.
I'm writing a story, "Who would've thought?" and I posted the first two parts, but I really appreciate some feedback if anyone had a little extra time on their hands. I'm not very good with grammar, and I need a little assistance on the actual story. I feel like it's taking me a really long time to write, and a really long time for the story to pick up. So, if anyone could head over there and read it:
part one:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33532.html
part two:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33542.html
it would be a great help to me.
Thank you!
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, I'll look at it.
In the future, when you need something reviewed, go to the "Will Review for Food" forum. It's in The Lounge. Just post the link to your story in anyone's topic. |
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