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Curlyqpride
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 Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:08 am Post subject: Kate |
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I really wanted to draw a picture of Kate from my story "Kate has 8 Lives" >http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32963.html , I just want to let you people know I did this for fun, and wanted to give you an idea what Kate looks like. Im not an srtist, lol Im horrible, but this will just give you an idea of what she looks like to me.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:36 am Post subject: |
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Oh my goodness, is that on paint?
I could NEVER do something like that on paint!
I really like it.
And now I'll read your story.
And put a picture with a face!
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:16 pm Post subject: lol |
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Thank you so much! It means alot to know someone liked this, I like it too, its just, I know it is a really un profesional type painting.
Ur awesome!  |
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| Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:07 am Post subject: |
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| This is really good |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:44 pm Post subject: Yay |
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Aww thanks, welcome to YWS!  |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:50 pm Post subject: |
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| I like it. Sure, it's unprofessional and done in paint, but I think the whole picture has this fun, funky quality to it that actually looks good! It's very appealing, though I honestly can't put my finger on anything specific. Anyway, good job! It makes me think that your story has that same fun quality to it, and you've managed to inspire me to go and have a look. Good job. |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, that is good for being done on Paint.
Her pupils look like they're coming off her eyeballs, and her right eye (my right) is sneaking into her hair, and it's a different shape to the left one.
Her hoodie's done well, but her hair looks rather ragged.
Still, granted how difficult it is to do things on Paint, it's very good! Her left eye (my left) is the best part, I think. |
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| Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:18 am Post subject: |
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| I actually like the hair. And the eyes look awesome. This is really amazing for MS paint, because that is an extremely difficult program to draw with. The left eyes is kind of drifting off into her hair... but still, the strongest part of this is the eyes, and they're what makes it stand out and look so good. |
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| Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:06 pm Post subject: |
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For MS Paint, it's good. I like the eyes, especially, which have an illuminosity to them.
How you could improve: There are dots that haven't been coloured - i know they're tricky to get back you could always zoom in. I'm only mentioning them because they do rather stand out. |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:13 pm Post subject: |
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Like everyone else says; for paint its good .
When I read your story, it seemed really realistic (good job on that!) but when I come to the illustration, it entirely changes my perspective. I think she looks a little bit too cartoon-y. I mean, of course it is a cartoon drawing, and it was to give an idea... But, the drawing doesn't actually click with your story.
I'm not trying to be cruel, haha, even though that's all I sound  but, I think it could use some work. Paint IS a hard program to master for beginners, so would you consider maybe drawing it on paper? I mean if someone can draw this good on paint, they can ace paper!
All in all, I love it, but it just doesn't fit your story  . And Im not saying that to be vulgar
keep it up; two thumbs up!
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| Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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| Wow, I love this! Especially the gray sweater. How can you say you're not an artist? Okay, now I'm definitely going to read the story. |
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| Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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| I liked this. I especially liked her eyes, I stared at them for quite some time! |
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