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 Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:07 pm Post subject: eye |
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I was playing with the zoom and negative buttons on my camera. Voila! I think it looks really cool. It has speck of amber in it and the eye looks kinda deep and meaningful.
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Whoa! That is really cool!
I like the brightness of the center of the eye.
It really does look like a vampires eye when you think of it!
Even more so with the hair (if that is hair, I can't really tell) where it goes down the center.
I also like the redness of the outer part of the eye. The way it contrasts with the lighter part.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:17 pm Post subject: |
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It does look pretty cool with those colored specks going across the eye. The pupil/iris area looks a lot like the moon, the way this came out, as though the full moon were reflected in the eye, especially considering the angle of the gaze. 
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| Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:33 am Post subject: |
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This is very neat.
There are specks in the eye
which give it that vampire feel.
And I agree, it does look like a
a moon in the pupil!
vury nice!(:
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| Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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This is really cool.
I love the light/white color in the pupil.
Especially how it contrasts with the dark redof the outer area!
The specks to me made me think that he/she was seeing something, and it was reflecting in their eyes.
And The pupil does look like the moon, so maybe the specks would be clouds rolling over the moon, everything reflected in the person/vampire's eyes.
Great job!
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| Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:26 pm Post subject: |
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Very nice but it's a little small, why not try to find a bigger picture and do the same? It would look a lot more powerful. In my opinion it would look better without the face and we just have the eye, it would give the picture a more mystical feel.
I really like it, just a few things I would change, as I've said 
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 3:36 am Post subject: |
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i really like this.
The eye really pops out at you.
And it does look like a moon in the midle of it.
I love the redish brown color around the center.
It would look cool if it was a bit bigger but i really like it.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:15 am Post subject: |
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It's neat, but I think that the little splotches of red dashing through the bright part of the eye really throws it down. If you were to get rid of that, this would be nearly perfect! I love the... er... what's it called? Beams of light shooting away from the eye. You have to look closely to see it, but in the bright section, it's almost as if there are little beams of light shooting away from it. Nice effect. I really love the red in the eye. You said it looked like a vampire eye? XD Now it's a bloodthirsty vampire.
Great job. I'll be looking for more.
-Jared
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