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Fair Is Foul
Fair Is Foul
by cherylkate in Romantic Fiction
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 9:05 pm    Post subject: Mosquito Bites Reply with quote
Okay, so this isn't really Something Completely Different, or even slightly original but what the hey.





I critique (awesomely, btw)

Any fiction, except Romance. Mainly because it makes me squirm.


I do not critique (with awesome refusal)

Poetry. Full stop, end of story, exploding grenade. No poetry. The Vogon has spoken.

Romantic Fiction, as already stated.

R-rated stuff. R-ratings make me pale and faint.


Things I kind of, sort of, might do well

Dialogue.
Word order.
Description.


Examples

Gyr's Gypsie Eyes.
Rudelyn's Memoir
Gyr's In Thrall (there's several of my crits on that page)
OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo's Eyes of the Empire



What I want in return

Ninja training.
An interview with Lex Luthor
Crits on Scavenger




It may hurt, but it helps.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey TL G-Wooster!

If you could crit Eyes of the Empire I'd be so extremely greatful! You don't have to read the prologue, but if you want to you can Very Happy

As for the ninja training, try this and for the interview with lex luthor try this.

Again, thank you so much! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Done it!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Done, BBB!

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33112.html

^_^ Review please! This is actually due today. >_> I will take a look at Scavenger as soon as I finish all my homework. o.O

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