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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:11 pm    Post subject: Me Hungry Reply with quote
I'm gonna be really informal about this and say, I'm not sure what I want to crit. People generally do like my crits. So if you just want a few extra opinions, let me know here.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 11:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey Rei,

I need some reviews on http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33030.html
when you have the time. ^_^

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Rei, I love your crits! And I'll give you one if you could crit my story "The List". It's really long though, I'm warning you. I would appreciate it so much though!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Two down, one to go!

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33373.html

This is the first chapter to supernatural novel. I warn you, it's long. Thanks in advance!

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