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Spiffygirl
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 Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:29 am Post subject: |
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I was looking at laptop covers a month ago on Gelaskins, and they have a version of it.
Glad to help! |
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| Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 3:57 am Post subject: |
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Wow this is really good! I wish i could draw like that.
The shading is awsome. Your art is cute.
Keep up the good work.  It will pay off. |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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Good creative concept here. Good facial expression drawn on the face of the goldfish's.
Better yet, a good tattoo idea. I'm sure there's more than just a few people that would love to have this picture on the back of their leg. You should do a copy of this picture with your colour concept added to it. You see a lot of fish as tattoos but most have colour.
Keep drawing, great work. |
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 4:20 am Post subject: |
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Whoa! I like this a lot. Just whoa, keep on drawing.
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:01 pm Post subject: |
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Now that I've seen the original, I think I know why the hand on yours looks like it's palm-down (the blobbiness around it in the original is confusing). I would try looking at your own hand rather than the ones in the picture if you decide to edit it and make it a bit thinner or something (but it's always really hard to erase dark pencil like that).
The fish in the bottom right is my favorite, he's so cute! I think the upper right one only looks funny because he's not really foreshortened enough - you can't really tell that his tail is behind him, it sort of looks like it's next to him.
I agree that it would be cute with color added... I'm kind of wondering what this would look like if you inked over it in something waterproof (maybe using a lightbox) and then used watercolors.
They're so cute, Via! I hope you post more of your drawings. |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:30 pm Post subject: |
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i liked all of this it was very good and well done, i don't have really anything to crit good job!
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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ha. thats really cool. it reminds me of something my friend would do...take the literal meaning of something and draw it...
i really liked this. its very well drawn...except for like, two of the fish...
nice work!
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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Oh they look like black moors hehe,
you are a very talented artist,
I love them.
it looks just like the original artwork. |
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:54 am Post subject: |
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Woah, that's really cool!
I really like the fish because they're weird but cool at the same time!
And you are a very talented artist, I could never do that to save my life! |
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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Thats trippy stuff. I wish i could draw that way!
Colour would add so much to it. But b/w is super cute too.
The detail is amazing too, and their expressions are so cute! |
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