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A Broken Promise.
A Broken Promise.
by Kaylyn in Other Poetry
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I like that song!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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I like the tempo and the beat of that song

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
7.5/10 I didn't really get it but the parts I understood were funny.

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very cool.
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that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

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very cool.
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that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

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.....oh wow x_X 7/10

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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there's a typo...

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Boo-yeah.

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I like the second one, but the first - the Bee Movie was strange. o_O

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
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It needs to be spaced out better. It looks like it's Bob Marley who said all that and like it's part of some weird song of his that quotes Gandhi. Confused

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7/10. can we post anything except picking on the french? i think that's sort of been a bit overdone.
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