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Chapter Eight -- Taking down Ruby
Chapter Eight -- Taking down Ruby

by wisemann210 in Fantasy Fiction
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I like this poem. At first I was like "Who is this airhead?" lol. No offense. But as I read, I really liked it. It's pleasantly confusing--those kinds of poems where you have to really THINK about what the writer means. I like its format; the way I percieve it, the parts that are not in (these thingies, I shall call them for I can't spell that...) are what you... I don't know, saying to yourself to make you feel better, but the stanzas that ARE in the thingies are what you really think about yourself. I may be wrong, but I still enjoyed this poem. Smile

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the cerebral lands...



..and the ending is cute.

well...not cute...whatever. you get my point.

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