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Twisting Paths: Preface and Part 1 of Chapter 1
Twisting Paths: Preface and Part 1 of Chapter 1

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My new novel's beginning.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:41 am    Post subject: My new novel's beginning. Reply with quote

“You won but you don’t want to go? Why?” I asked Chris.

  “Because.”

  “Oh, that was eloquent.”

  “No, I mean because the ticket is good for only one person.”

  “So?”

  “Bailey.”

  “What about her?”

  “We’re getting serious.”

  “You’re telling me that you are giving up surviving to go and hang out with your girlfriend?”

  “I love her dude,” he said.

  “You’re eighteen. You have no idea what love is.”

  “Yeah? I bet you I do.”

  “What is it?”

  “It’s what Bailey and I have. You remember when I first asked her out. She said no and I was devastated. If a girl can devastate you by just saying she won’t even go out with you, then you’re probably in love.”

  “Bull,” I said. “I vote you take the ticket and get off this drowning planet before you become just another casualty.”

  “I’m not taking this ticket,” he said with absolute sincerity. “Either you do, or I give it to some bum on the street.”

  “Give it to me,” I said. He passed it to me and I put it into my wallet. “I’ll think about it.”

  “Fine. That shuttle leaves in three weeks. The shuttle people need an answer by the end of the week. You better think fast.”

  “I will, don’t worry.”

  “You better. Now, I gotta go. Bailey’s waiting for me. We’re going to see some flick about the end of New Earth. You want to come?”

  “I’m still trying to deal with the end of the old one. I don’t need a Hollywood version of it in my head.”

  Chris laughed and said, “It’s just a movie my friend.”

  “I know but it holds no interest for me what-so-ever.”

  “Did I ever tell you that you think too much?”

  “Only every day since fifth grade.”

  “Okay, just checking. See ya man,” he said and left the room.

  “See ya!” I called after him.

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  A few minutes later I walked downstairs to get a drink of water. I heard the sound of the TV and sighed. These days that was all my father did. He sat on the couch, watching the news on the TV, and yelling updates to me. He could have just looked out the window and seen exactly what the news anchors were telling him.

  “So, let me ask you something,” a news anchor was saying.

  “As long as it’s in my field I’ll try to answer,” a woman replied.

  “How long do you believe it will be before this state, Florida, is gone?”

  “Is that with the water levels rising as fast as they have been in the past week or faster?”

  “Which ever you think is to be more a reality than science fiction.”

  “If the ocean continues to rise as is or faster I believe that the state of Florida will be gone in a year.”

  “A year? That’s so soon though.”

  “Not really. Scientists have been telling the people since as early as 2000 that the world was in danger. We just didn’t listen. And I only meant that the water level will be over Florida. The farther you go up towards the mainland buildings and cars and such will still be above water. If you’re on the point of Florida then, well, I hope you have some kind of insurance.”

  The news anchor gave a nervous laugh and said, “Do you believe there’s any hope for this planet?”

  “Sure I do.”

  “You do? What?” His voice was filled with surprise and relief.

  “The only way everyone will be safe on this planet is if they get on a shuttle and go to New Earth. Hopefully the government there won’t make the same mistakes as the governments of this planet have.”

  “Bah!” my father said and the TV went quiet. “Max, was that you coming down the stairs?”      

“If it wasn’t you’d either be dead or robbed. Or both.” I said.

  “Don’t be a smart ass. Listen, if you ever get one of those shuttle lottery tickets I want you to take it. Don’t worry about me. Just take it for yourself.”

  “I know dad. You’ve told me before.” Did Chris call and tell him that he gave me a ticket? I wondered.

  “Well, I’m just reminding you. You heard the man on the TV. A year. That’s all we have left. I’d move us somewhere else, but we have no money. No one wants to buy a home that’ll be underwater in a year anyway.”

  “I know Dad. It’s okay. We’ll figure it out in a year. Lets not worry about it right now.”

  My father sighed then got up from the couch. “I’m going to go and take a nap. Wake me up for the 11 o’clock news, will ya?”

  “Sure.”

  “Thanks,” he said and then he went upstairs.

I waited for him to close his door before taking out my wallet. I opened it up and pulled out the lottery ticket. It read, “To lucky winner 12. Congratulations on winning the colonization shuttle. You will be going with a group of 1,000 to start up a civilization on New Earth. Old Earth does not have much longer and we wish to try and preserve our race. This ticket is good for only one (1) person.”

“Should I take it?” I whispered.

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  “Well, it had no good actors but at least the visual effects were stunning,” Chris said to Bailey. He wrapped his arm around her and continued to walk towards the street to get a taxi. With the gas, ethanol, and hydrogen prices so high almost no one drove. It was all public transportation.

  “Can we walk?” Bailey pinched his side and smiled.

  “You want to walk? We’re like thirty miles away from your house.”

  “Just for a while? It’s not like it cold or anything. Actually, it’s quite beautiful out right now.”

  He smiled at her, “Yeah, we can walk. But only because you’re so damn cute.”

  She laughed, “Sorry.”

  “You should be,” he teased. “Most people I can say no to and that includes Max. You, however, are a different story.”

  She smiled and they continued to walk. There weren’t many people on the street and only a few taxis. That wasn’t odd but the night in particular was. It was the first really nice night. For the past three months it would be sweltering during the day time and stormy at night. Tonight there wasn’t a cloud in the sky and a slight breeze was blowing.

  “You know I love you right Chris?” Bailey whispered.

  “Really?” he smiled. “I had no idea.”

  “I’m serious.”

  He looked at her, “Yeah. I know you do. You know I love you right?”

  “Yes.”

  “What’s wrong?” he asked. This isn’t going to be good news.

  “I--” but before she could answer Chris’s cell phone rang.

  “Hold that thought,” he said. “Hello?”

  “Chris? It’s Max.”

  “Max, I can’t talk right now.”

  “I’m just calling to tell you that I’m going to do it. I’m going to get off this planet.”

  “That’s great news!”

  “I hope so.”

  “Listen, we have to have some kind of party. I gotta go now though,” Chris said.

  “Sure, man. Talk to ya later,” Click. The line went dead.

  “Sorry.”

  “Good news?”

  How do I answer this? He wondered. Do I tell her about giving up the ticket to stay with her? Or do I just tell her that Max won a ticket? She’ll be mad about me giving up the ticket, even if she does love me.

  “Yeah. Max called to say he won a shuttle ticket and he’s going to use it.”

  “Really! That’s great. He’ll get off this damned planet.”

  Now he knew something was wrong. She almost never swore. “Babe, what’s wrong?” he asked again.

  “My parents! They’re leaving to go to New York.”

  “So? They’ll be back.”

  “No, ugh, you don’t get it. They’re leaving Florida for good. They don’t want to die in this state. They want to live for a little while longer. They don’t like knowing that if they stayed they would be dead in a year or so.”

  They were silent for a minute. He didn’t know what to say. He knew what he wanted to ask but he dreaded the answer.

  He asked anyway, “And you?’

  “Huh?”

  “What about you Bailey?”

  “Oh,” she went silent. They continued to walk. He knew that was his answer but he wanted to be sure.

  “You’re going with them?”

  “Yes.”

  “Why?” he said. He felt like he was shouting at her but knew he was barely audible.

  “They’re my parents Chris. I love you and I love them. But they’re my parents. They said I could go with them and they’ll pay for college and they’ll let me live with them for free and everything.”

  “They bought you!” Now he heard his echoes in the night.

  “No! They just offered to pay for everything. I already told them I’d go with ‘em.”

  “What about…” he let the question linger.

  “I don’t know. Maybe you could come with us?”     “My Gram and Mom. I can’t leave them behind.”

  “See? You can’t be mad at me for going if you won’t leave. It’s the same thing.”

  “I’m not mad at you. I’m mad at the situation.”

  A cold wind blew and Bailey put her arms around herself. Chris took off his spring jacket and went to hand it to her. She smiled. “What about you?”

  “I’m not cold,” he said and smiled.

  “Yea you are. Put it back on.”

  “No, either you take it or I leave it right here on the ground,” he said and let it fall to the ground. They continued to walk.

  She laughed “You going back to grab that?”

  “Are you going to use it if I do?”

  “You’re ridiculous.”

  “I know. But it’s one of the reasons you love me.”

  “Shut up.”

  “What?”

  “You don’t know why I love you.”

  “True, but I can make guesses.”

  “Go and get the coat will ya?”

  “Sure.” He ran back and grabbed it off the ground. He walked behind her and put the coat of her shoulders. “I love you, Bailey.” He kissed her. His mind was everywhere. He knew that his future just grew a little darker but he was happy at the moment and to him that was all that mattered.

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“Mr. Rogo,” the secretary said. “Mr. Dranell will see you now.”

Rory Rogo got up from his chair and walked into the oval office. Taylor Dranell was of average build, had black hair, eyes of copper, and was tall. Hardly anyone stood over Rory’s 6’6” build yet Taylor seemed to tower a good two inches over him.

“You asked for me Mr. President?” Rory said.

“Call me Taylor, “ the president smiled. “Yes, I wanted to tell you to meet the captain of the Wanderer. I hear you’re a politician as well, is that correct?

“Yes, sir. I plan on running for the position of president on New Earth. I figure I’ll go down in history as the president of the first established colony in a different world. I figure it will be like Christopher Columbus but only more grand.”

Taylor chuckled. “ Ah, well. Good luck to that,” he said and then fell silent.

“Sir?” Rory asked.

“What do you think our chances are, Mr. Rogo?”

“For what sir?”

“For this colonization fleet. Do you think that it will succeed?”

“I don’t have a doubt about it.”

“Why’s that?”

“You probably know more to the ‘why’ than I do sir.”

“Still, I’m interested in someone else’s opinion. I’m tired of the space techs telling me of possibilities and light years and the blights here on Earth. I want a fresh opinion.”

“Very well. The biggest reason I think that this colonization fleet will succeed is that it there is no one there. I would understand your concern more clearly if there was a threat on this new planet. There isn’t though. No war to be fought or citizens to assimilate. It’s basically a case of build and live. Instant civilization.”

“You think that it’ll be that easy?”

“It better be. I hear it will only be citizens and construction crews going there. If there’s a threat then many will die.”

“You’re wrong about that, Mr. Rogo.”

“About what sir?”

“About only sending up construction crews and civilians.”

“Oh?”

“I’ve decided to send up some military. For security reasons of course. Since you will be the one flying the ship I wanted to set base with you. You will be the one in charge of the the military personnel I’m sending up. Is that okay with you?”

“I don’t see a problem with that.”

“Good. Then when the civilians elect president you will hand over, unless you become the president of course, the army to the newly appointed president. You understand?”

“Yes sir.”

“You’re dismissed.”

“One thing, Mr. Pres-- I mean, Taylor.”

“Yes?”

“What does Japan, China, Russia, Great Britain think of our colonizing a new planet?”

“What makes you think they know?”

Rory Rogo stared with his mouth open at the leader of the strongest country in the world. “Isn’t that dangerous sir?”

“Is it your job to worry about that Mr. Rogo?”

“No sir.”

“Then, like I said before, you are dismissed.”

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was a good read. You've got the problem set up pretty well and introduced the major back story without an info dump. The only thing that bothered me was the dialogue. It just seemed odd at times, and in the beginning it was hard to tell who was talking. I'd suggest reading the dialogue out loud to yourself, record yourself saying it, or have someone else read it. This could help fix awkward lines. Other than that, I really liked it and can't wait for more! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would add more detailto the first conversation buty besides that, it was pretty good. Yes, it has potential if handled correctly. The character was okay, funny which is always great as long as you make sure he does not turn into a bobby joe. (I think that is what it'scalled, hehe) The male version of a mary sue who is a perfect person and just makes everyone else look bad.

Keep it up, it could be good. Don't give up on it and keep writing please!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Definitely needs a proof-read.

I know it's fun to make a story about something as enormous a the world ending. I get that, but even so, it's a huge cliche. You don't need to make it about something that big to have a great story.

I won't nit-pick because - hopefully - you'll find all the mistakes when you go over it. Try to steer away from common happenings. Do something no one will expect!

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 4:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this was a great beginning.
it left some of it open and at the same time clearly stated the problem from several different perspectives.
i agree with some of the others that the dialogue was--at times--sort of confusing.
but other times, it was great.

all around, a great read and introduction to what i'm sure will be a great story.
Keep writing!



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Definitely re-read and revise.

I saw a couple typos, words spelled funny and such.

I didn't notice any run on sentences and your grammar was good.

I really like the plot of this story, I'm very interested in reading more!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

are all the other countries sending secret colony ships too? that could lead to some complications especially if they have chosen the same spots to set up a colony. and is the presidential hopeful the type to give up the only military in that new solar system to someone else. He obviously wants his name to go down in history. hmmm.

Sorry, im a sucker for made up politics. Yeah its a pretty standard set up, but there are loads of ways you can go with it. Surprise me! try stealing from history. that stuff is juicy *drools*
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I absolutely loved it!!!! It was amazing. It saddens me that one day sci-fi-ish books like this may become reality. Global warming is something I am passionate about, and I absolutely loved this! It does have amazing potential! I would LOVE to read the rest of it. I'm not lying it was amazing. The storyline and the way you told it.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:51 am    Post subject: I'm glad you all liked it...here's the second part Reply with quote

I walked into the building with my father next to me. He was amazed at everything and though I tried hard to be calm, cool, and collected, my amazement was equal to his.

“Where do you suppose we go?” he asked me.

“My guess would be over where all the people are standing.”

My father rolled his eyes and said, “Why don’t you ask. Just to make sure ya know?”

“Sure,” I said and walked over to a cute girl with brown hair and gray eyes. “Excuse me. My father and I were wondering if this is the right line to stand in for the shuttle?”

“This guy,” she said pointing to the man standing in front of her, “told me that it’s the right line. So, yeah,” she smiled, “it is.”

“Thank you,” I said. I waved over to my father and then turned back to the girl. “So, did you win a lottery ticket or purchase a shuttle ticket?”

“Are you kidding me?” she said with a smile, “Do I really look like I can afford that price for a ticket? No. I just won the lottery. I’m glad too because I hear that all debts that I, or you for that matter, owe here on this planet will be paid off by the government. My new laptop and car… bam!” she laughed, “I don’t owe anything on them anymore.”

“Looks like I should go and buy anything I can now.”

“You’re allowed a computer up there. At least that’s what I hear.”

“I’ve got one already. Still, if I knew that before I’d have bought a nice house for my father. They told me when I entered that I can’t leave again.”

“Really? How’d they know you were here for the shuttle?”

“My father blabbed. He’s proud of me. I don’t know why. It’s not like I won the ticket I have.”

“You didn't? Then how’d you end up with it?”

“My best friend. He decided there were other important things here on earth than his own safety.”

“So he gave the ticket to you? Wow, some friend.”

“Max!” my father called. “Come here real quick.”

“I’ll see you later?”

“Yeah,” she said and moved up in the line.

I walked over to my dad and said, “She was kind of cute. What’s up?”

“I’m leaving. You could, you know, show compassion or something.”

“You wanted me to do this, dad. Remember?”

“Yeah, I remember. Still, I don’t think we’ll be seeing each other. I don’t know much about space travel and what not but I remember learning that it takes light years to reach planets. That’s a lot of miles. By the time you reach new earth…”

I didn’t like where this conversation was going. He was right though. I hadn’t put much thought into this part of my plans. I knew, at least I thought I knew, that I was never going to see my father ever again. I also knew that by the time I reached New Earth, he’d be close to deaths door. It wasn’t a pleasant thought and I didn’t want to speak it or dwell on it. Especially with him.

“Dad, I am going to miss you. I mean, you’re the best parent a kid could ask for. After Ma left us you had to pick up the slack and handle me. You always did the right thing, even if I thought it was wrong. I’m sorry about all the trouble I was. Just don’t let this,” I pointed at the line, “be the end of you. I’ll be okay. You shouldn’t treat this like something bad is happening. I’ll carry on our family’s genes and make sure that we don’t ruin our second chance.”

Tears dripped down Theo “Red” Jacobsen’s face. “A simple ‘Love you’ would have sufficed.”

I laughed, “I love you, dad.”

“I love you too, son. Don’t worry about me. I’ll live. This world is going to hell but it won’t get there until later. Be careful.”

“I always am.”

He smiled and gave me a hug. “She should be here with us too.”

“No, she shouldn’t. She left us. Even if she was here for some reason I wouldn’t even look at her. As far as I’m concerned you’re the last of my family.”

“I’m missing so much of you’re life. You’ll get married, have children, have a real good chance on New Earth. It’s not fair. Tell them about me, will ya?”

“Dad, I’m eighteen. I’m not planning on starting a family the moment I touchdown there.”

“Still…”

“Don’t worry. They’ll know all about you.”

“Thanks.” He let go of me. “Listen, there’s a storm coming. Normally, I wouldn’t care but they say it’s going to bring--”

“Just go, dad. Don’t make this any harder.”

“Okay.” He looked at me. Then he pulled out a camera. “I know you hate them, but just give me a really good one.”

I smiled and the flash from the camera and the lightning outside went off. “Better hurry,” I said.

“Good luck.”

I nodded and he stood there looking at me. I knew he wouldn’t leave until I said or did something else. I gave a final look at him and walked back into the line. When I looked back, I saw him leaving the building.

“Tough saying ‘G’bye’ huh?” the girl I was speaking to earlier asked.

“Even tougher when you know it’s for good.”

“Yeah, I hear you. I had to say good bye to my mom and grandma earlier. Where was you’re mom?”

“She died. A while ago.”

“Oh,” she said and looked away.

“It happened when I was young. I really don’t remember her,” I said trying to break the awkward silence forming. It held.

“Next!” a counter girl yelled.

The girl walked up to the counter.

“Name?” the counter girl asked.

“Gaia Lowell.”

“Purchase or ticket?”

“You mean am I buying a ticket or did I win one?” Gaia asked the woman. The woman nodded. “I won one.”

“Please go to the doors on you’re right. Next!”

“I’ll save you a seat.” Gaia said to me.

“Okay,” I said and walked up to the counter.

“Name?”

“Max Jacobsen.” She typed my name in to a computer.

“Purchase or lottery ticket?”

“Lottery ticket.”

“Please go to the doors on you’re right. Next!”

I went through the doors and almost ran right into Gaia who was standing right inside the doorway behind a line that was twice as long as the one we just waited in.

“I take it that there are more lottery winners than purchasers?”

Gaia laughed and said, “We haven’t been introduced formally, though I think you already know my name. I’m Gaia Lowell.”

I took her hand and shook it lightly. “I’m Maxwell Jacobsen, but most people call me Max.”

“Most people, huh?”

“Yeah.”

“Max, tsk tsk tsk.”

“What?”

“That was a totally stupid way to introduce yourself.”

“It was?”

“Yeah. See, there isn’t most people anymore. We are no longer Earth civilians. We are New Earth civilians. The moment we stepped inside the building we became New Earth civilians. So, telling me that most people call you Max is really kind of silly because I’m the only person you’ve talked to since you’ve arrived at this place.”

I smiled, “Are you always in a good mood?”

“I try to be.”

“Well then, let me start over.”

“Please do.”

“My name is Maxwell, but I prefer to be called Max. Better?”

“Much.”

“So, now we just wait huh?”

“They have to process us. Long and tedious work.”

“They could’ve given us some chairs or something to sit on.”

“They could have except that would have been too nice. They want to make sure that we aren’t pampered civilians who will only complain when we get to New Earth.”

“Really?”

“Well, that’s my theory.”

I rolled my eyes. This won’t be such a bad trip if I get to hang out with her most of the time, I thought.

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The phone rang. And rang. And rang. Finally, she rolled over and picked up the phone. “Hello?” she said with a yawn.

“Bailey?” she heard from the other end.

“Hey,” she said and found herself waking up. Chris had that effect on her.

“I can’t sleep.”

“Aww, what’s wrong?”

“What do you mean what’s wrong? Everything is wrong! You’re moving, there’s a freaking hurricane happening right outside, Florida is drowning, and my freaking best friend is about to be shipped off to another planet. Everything is wrong!”

“Calm down, Chris. It’s not all that bad. You’re just putting a negative light on things.”

“Oh, really?”

“Would I lie to you?”

“No,” and she smiled at the quickness it came. “I just can’t see how any of this is good.”

“Well, it’s not all good. We still have to talk about me moving and what we’re going to do. The hurricane and Florida drowning really sucks too. I don’t even think I could put a positive spin on that one.”

“See, nothings good.”

“Oh, sure, if you think you’re best friend being saved from a sure drowning isn’t a good thing. He’s also going to be part of a colonization fleet! Something people will read about for years in history books.”

“Still…”

“You’re just mad about losing you’re best friend?”

“Is that a bad thing?”

“Yup, I’ll hate you forever.”

“I don’t like showing weakness,”

“I know. He’s you’re best friend though. You’re allowed when it comes to him...or me.”

“What are we going to do?” he asked, changing the subject.

“Live, love, do the whole American thing?”

“I mean about us! You’re moving.”

She sighed and rubbed her eyes. This was dangerous ground, she knew. She loved him and he loved her but handling this the wrong way could get more than feelings hurt. “We can have a long distance relationship.”

“Oh, yeah that would work. And then in a few months you’ll get mail telling you where my funeral is.”

“Chris!” she said sharply.

“I didn’t mean that I’d kill myself. I meant in a few months Florida will be totally underwater. Those still living here will be dead.”

“Still, I don’t like it when you think about death,”

There was a second of silence and then he said, “I don’t think a long distance relationship will work.”

“I know,” she said. “The only other option is you coming with me,”

“Or…”

“Or?”

“You could stay here with me.”

“Do you even listen to yourself?”

“What?”

“You just told me that anyone still living in Florida at the end of the next few months will be dead. I don’t feel like dying this early.”

“We could survive.”

“I can’t stay here, Chris. I want a decent chance at a life.”

“I can’t go with you, Bailey.”

“Why not?”

“I can’t leave my Mom or Grams.”

“Bring them too.”

“Grandma will never leave. Mom, maybe. Grandma, she’s in love with her house. She won’t leave it even if...even if the worst happens.”

“So, just you and you’re Mom then.”

“Mom won’t leave unless Gram does.”

“Then what Chris? What do you want me to do? You want me to stay here, hold you’re hand, and watch as the water rises? That’s not happening. I love you and I would give anything to be with you...but not my life. I won’t give up my life to die with the one I love.”

“I don’t know!” he yelled, startling her. “Okay? I don’t know. All I know is that I don’t want you to leave me and I don’t want to be hurt.”

“You may have to be Chris. I can’t stay. I won’t stay. It’s up to you to decide whether or not you’re going to come with me.”

“You’re going to make me choose between you and my family?”

“I would never. And you know that. No, I just want you to make sure you know what you’re doing. You are willingly dying to be with your stubborn family. They’re wonderful people, Chris, but they’re asking you to die with them.”

“They aren’t asking me to do anything,” he snapped and she knew she’d crossed a line. “I want to be with them. They would let me go with you if…”

“If what, Chris? If you really wanted to?” There was silence on the other end. “What are you afraid of?”

“I don’t want to lose them!”

“You’re going to lose them anyway, baby. It’s not you’re choice to decide when you lose them. The only choice you get is whether you lose yourself with them or not.”

“Bailey…”

“I’m tired, Chris. I’ll call you in the morning, okay?”

“Don’t hang up, Bailes.”

“Love you,” she said and hung up. She turned the ringer off and then rolled over. She didn’t sleep the rest of the night.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

“Welcome,” the man in front of the room said. He wore faded jeans, a black hoodie, converse shoes, and his white hair was sharp contrast to his skin color. “My name is Rory Rogo. I will be the commander of the colonization fleet and will be host for all you New Earth civilians. We are heading into uncivilized world. I’m going to be honest with you folks, its not going to be easy. In fact it will be harder than anything any of you have endured. You may remember you’re grandparents stories of their survival of Hurricane Katrina back in the 2000’s. This will be harder than that.
“My friends here,” he pointed to the security guards on either side of him, “are going to come around and collect any mobile device you have. Don’t worry, once we’re on New Earth you’ll get them back.”
A guy from the back of the room asked, “There’ll be cell phone, internet, and cable up there?”
“This isn’t a vacation,” My. Rogo said, “it’s a new world; a new life. Everything this world has, the next will too. Well, everything but the environmental problem. Will you have the internet and cell phone service and cable? The first two you’ll have almost immediately. Cable… that may be a few years. We have to establish a new order. We did not give lottery tickets to any actors and only a handful of retired actors bought tickets. So, I’m thinking that cable will be a few years.” He turned to one of the security guards and asked, “Did you get everyone’s? Good.” He turned back to the group. “You now have no connection to anyone outside these walls. Though people often describe me as a miserable person who must make everyone else miserable, I didn’t do this for that reason. What I’m about to tell you is a matter of international security. Its information that no one but the most important people have. No other country has this information. We want to keep it that way.
“Space travel is slow. Think of the longest car trip you have ever taken and you will not even see a glimmer of long this trip would have taken. It would have taken at least forty-five years, if not more. However, the United States government has devoted so much money to space technology in recent decades that there is no longer a clear indicator of how much money has actually been funded to this project. We have discovered that it is actually possible to reach New Earth in not forty-five years but in a single year. We’re still going to be put under but that’s just for precaution. This way the government does not need to spend extra money on keeping us entertained and making sure no one goes crazy with cabin fever.”
I leaned over to Gaia and said, “We all could entertain ourselves.”
“No,” she said with a smile, “We’d all go stir-crazy.”
“Still, I’m not a fan of sleeping for a year.”
“It won’t be too bad. It will probably seem like another night except with more vivid dreams.”
“Why more vivid dreams?”
“Because you’re sleeping longer.”
“So?”
“You’re mind will be able to form dreams given more time.”
“Bull.”
“Well, that’s my theory.”
Rory Rogo clapped his hands to gain the attention of the audience. Now that I thought about it, everyone was speaking over him. The room went quiet as everyone looked up from their conversations to hear Mr. Rogo talk. “There’s a few ground rules that I need to lay down. The first, of course, is that all things illegal here is illegal there. The second is that although we’re positive that this planet has nothing equal to us in intelligent, we do not know if there are more dangers there than here. We have not explored the whole planet. This means we don’t know where all the crevices, caves, or if there are dangerous creatures beyond anything we’ve seen here on earth. Do not go out alone and always carry some kind of communication device. The final rule is that this will be a democratic society meaning all people who are over eighteen must vote. They don’t vote then they’ll be put on a ship back to earth… after it’s been revealed that man can travel faster than light. That’s over a forty-five year penalty. Just vote people.”
“Odd campaign,” I said.
“You think he’s going to campaign?” she asked.
“Wouldn’t you?”
“Why would I?”
“Okay, look at it this way. You’re the captain of the ship going to a new world. Why are we leaving the old world? Because it’s dead. So you’re saving people from a certain death and giving them a second chance. Now, what happens when you get to the new world? You lose all the power and glory you had on the trip here. So, how do you get that power back?”
“You run for a political position?”
“Exactly, but not just any position. It has to be the highest one. The one that is equal to the power you had on the ship. Mayor or President is my guess.”
“Aren’t you a little young to be so cynical?”
“I’m eighteen. I’ll be a cynical as I want.”
Mr. Rogo said, “The ship leaves in three hours. We’ll be back to get you,” he said and left the room with his security guards. I heard the door lock behind him.
“He doesn’t really trust us does he?” I said.
“We’re now a matter of international security,” she mocked and laughed.
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“It won’t be much a secret since you decided to have it broadcast nationally. Foreign news stations will pick it up with in minutes. What are going to tell England? France? Russia? Oh, and when Japan finds out--” She began when Taylor entered their bedroom. She complains a lot more now than before I was elected, he thought.
“They’ll do nothing,” he said.
Her eyes grew wide with a surprise and fear mixture. “You told them?”
“No! Of course not. But what will they do once they find out? Go and blow up the colony? Its impossible.”
“”No its not. Any government with any kind of worth has put the same kind of money into space initiatives as you. They’ll figure out you’re secret. I love you but I’d be lying if I said you weren’t the most naive person I know.”
“So, what are you saying? They’ll figure it out and go out to colonize another planet? Let them.”
“The United States have been looking for a planet that is like Earth since early 2000’s. Eighty years ago! In that time how any planets have you discovered?”
“Hundreds.”
“Yeah? And how many of them are habitable?”
“Just because we’ve found only one out of those hundreds does not mean they won’t find different planets.”
“Not only are you the most naive man I’ve ever known but now you’re acting like you don’t even have a brain.”
“Stop insulting me.”
“Start thinking! They will find out how to travel as fast as light. They won’t waste more time and money on trying to find a different planet to colonize. They don’t have that kind of time any more. The world is sinking. Prices on everything no longer go down but up every day. Why would they try to find another place to go when you’re giving them everything they need with this stupid national broadcast?”
“I need to give the American people some kind of hope!” he shouted at her. “They need it. We’ve got more than 200 million without homes. Another 300 million complaining about prices and weather and how the president doesn’t even try to make it so anyone will survive. They need this.”
“Well, so does the rest of the world. Maybe the American people won’t realize it but everyone else will. You aren’t doing Americans a favor. You’re giving them the short end of the stick and giving everyone else the key to survival. You could have at least sold it.”
“For what? Now who’s naive? The world is ending! Hurricanes, typhoons, thunderstorms, earthquakes, sinkholes, tsunamis, and volcanic eruptions. This world has precious few years left. Money does not mean anything anymore. If I would have sold the information it wouldn’t do us any good.”
“You shouldn’t just give it up.”
“Why not? What could I get for it?”
“It just seems wrong!”
“There’s nothing I can do--”
“Sorry to interrupt you’re current news broadcasting,” the television cut Taylor off. “There seems to be a shuttle lifting off in a few minutes at the Kennedy Center in Florida. The only thing, it’s not a shuttle we’ve ever seen before.”
“Now.” Taylor finished.
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“Chris! You made it,” Theo said, taking Chris’s coat.
“Of course. You didn’t think I would?”
“Its not that. Its just...well I wouldn’t have blamed you if you didn’t show up.”
“He’s my best friend. Who cares if he’s going forty years away. I wouldn’t have missed it even if it was the end of the world.”
Theo ignored Chris’ dry sense of humor. “Where’s Bailey?”
“I don’t know.”
“What do you mean ‘I don’t know’? You two are always together. You’re practically joined at the hips.”
“She’s mad at me.”
“Really?”
“Yeah. Well, no. I’m mad at her. Or maybe its a little of both.”
“Trouble in paradise?”
“Yeah. Her moving away would definitely cause some trouble in paradise.”
“She’s moving? Where to?”
“New York.”
“Really? I have some family up there. Near Buffalo.”
“Yeah, thats where she’s moving. Or at least she said it’s close to Buffalo. On the lake.”
“Which one?”
“Erie, I suppose.”
“Hmm.” Theo moved into the living room. The television was on to the local news station and a group of people were around it. “So, why is this trouble for you?”
“Huh? You mean her moving away? Isn’t obvious?”
“Oh, sure. That’s why I’m asking you why its trouble.”
“Sarcasm. Now I see where Max gets it from,” Chris said and Theo burst out laughing. “It’s trouble because I’ll never see her again.”
“Go with her. I’ve seen you two together. I doubt she’d mind.”
“No, she wouldn’t. She’s asked me to go with her. But…”
“That’s great!” Theo said and smiled. Then the smiled faltered. “But?”
“I can’t leave my mom or Nana.”
“That’s a piss poor excuse, you know that right?”
“What?” Chris said. “Why?”
“How old are you, son?”
“Eighteen.”
“What were you planning on doing this year, now that you’re done with high school?”
“Going to college.”
“Yeah? Where?”
Chris paused. “Ooh.”
“How far away?”
“ ‘Bout two hours.”
“Oh. So, were you planning on staying on campus or staying at home and commuting?”
“Okay. I get it.”
“Just answer the question.”
“I was planning on dorming.”
“So, you were going to be away from Nana and you’re mom?”
“Yeah.”
“Oh, okay. So, why aren’t you going to New York with that girl?”
“Maybe--”
“Sorry to interrupt you’re current news broadcasting. There seems to be a shuttle lifting off in a few minutes at the Kennedy Center right here in Florida. The only thing, it’s not a shuttle we’ve ever seen before.”
All eyes turned to the television. It was dead silent in the house but still someone turned the volume up. The cameraman focused on the shuttle.
And it was ugly. Right away one could tell it was the most expensive project the United States ever funded. It was a huge octagon made of black shinny metal with red x’s on each side. On each corner there was a regular shuttle.
“This isn’t a shuttle folks. We have confirmation that this is not a shuttle. Instead it is the colonization fleet going to New Earth. Instead of being one singular unit though, it is eight shuttles launching and pulling the fleet behind it. Never before in history has this many shuttles launched so close together. It seems like it might be dangerous.”
“Dangerous?” Theo asked the room. “The ticket never said anything about this being dangerous.”
“Everything is going to be fine, Theo,” an old woman said. Chris realized it was Max’s grandmother.
“There!” the cameraman yelled. “It’s launching!”
Fire consumed the ground below the...fleet. Smoke and heat waves radiated off the monstrous construction while the cameraman backed up. He was swaering but news station wasnt even trying to cover the curse words. Then the monstrous thing started to rise off the ground.
“It’s working,” Max’s grandmother said. She said it with a voice that didn’t even think it was a possibility this could fail.
It was 100 feet in the air and the flames grew brighter. It was now under full pressure to take off. Another hundred feet, then another, The cameraman followed it as it rose into the sky. 1000….2000….3000 feet. It continued to rise. Then the shuttles on each corner detached from the main part. They rose while the main part seemed to stay in mid-air. Then the thing started to fall. The shuttles continued to rise.
“It’s falling!” Theo yelled. The house erupted in panic.
The shuttles continued to rise and the main building continued to fall. 5000 feet...2500 feet.
Then cables buckled. The building swayed. The shuttles begin to lose speed.
“They’re really dragging it into space,” Chris said.
“What do you mean?” Max’s grandmother asked.
“The cables. Look. There’s got to be at least 100 cables connecting from one shuttle to the building. That’s over 800 cables. What kind are they using?”
“Strong one’s I hope.”
“Oh My God.” The cameraman said. “They’re snapping.” He zoomed in and sure enough the cables connecting to the shuttles were snapping. Even though it was thousands of feet above the man, the cables still made audible snapping noises.
The shuttles continued to race toward space and drag the fleet behind them. Cables snapped and fell towards earth yet the shuttles and the fleet were not slowing down.
Now, the black monstrosity was a speck against the blue sky. The cameraman followed it with his camera. He zoomed in as far as he could but soon that was not enough to see the thing.
“Is it going to make it?” Chris asked.
“If not… it won’t be pretty,” Theo said.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 6:40 am    Post subject: Part...uh 4 i think Reply with quote

I looked over at Gaia. She holding my hand but I didn’t think it would be connected to anything if she squeezed any harder. Not that I could blame her really. I had my own death grip on the arm of the chair. The rumbling outside and the shaking inside made me feel sick but I knew it would be over soon. I kept telling myself, a few more minutes. That’s all. Then it’s over.
Then my stomach did a flip. We weren’t weightless but I could tell that we were in the air. The ship didn’t have windows, thank god, yet I knew we were in the air and that we were going up. Fast.
Then...nothing. I heard clicks and then nothing at all. We weren’t going up nor were we going down. We were stopped.
We started to fall. I threw up. I looked next to me and seen that Gaia also threw up but she at least fainted. I could feel the building gaining more speed as it fell to the earth and thought that any minute I would see the bright lights everyone talks about when they have a near death experience.
The whole building shuttered. It was like driving really fast in a car and then slamming on the brakes. The seatbelt tightened but you’re body still wanted to move. The building did exactly that. The cables, I thought. The cables were stopping the plummet towards earth. We were still falling but I could definitely feel us slowing down. Finally we stopped falling. Then we started to rise again.
“It’s like a bad elevator ride,” the man next to me said. I chuckled.
We started to rise faster and faster. “You hear that, man?” I said.
“What?” he said. He had his eyes closed and looked like he might be sick any minute.
“Snapping. I hear snapping.”
“Really?” he was quiet for a minute. Everyone in the room was quiet. My guess was that they were all busy praying we didn’t die. “Yeah, I hear snapping too. Do they have music on or something?”
“No. It’s not music.”
“What is it?”
“The cables.”
“Oh, god,” he fell silent and while I guessed everyone else was praying I knew he was.
Snap.
Snap.
Snap.
Snap, snap, snap, snap, snap. They just continued to snap. We were still picking up speed but for how much longer? If we went higher it would just be a bigger explosion when we fell. How many cables did they say they had connecting from one shuttle to the fleet? 500? Was that going to be enough?
Then the far side of the fleet started to tilt back towards earth. The whole fleet title a little. The room erupted in screams and cries. Still, the shuttles were moving.
A loud snap came from directly above the room. Our side tilted towards earth. I screamed so loud and hard my voice was gone within seconds. I looked over at Gaia but she was still passed out. The man next to me looked like he was too.
Then...peace.
We we’re moving still but I couldn’t feel a pull towards earth.
“Artificial gravity is online,” a voice above us said.
I felt pressure again but not as strong as Earth’s gravity pull. I poked the man next to me and he opened his eyes. “We made it,” I said.
“We did? We’re not dead?”
“Not yet. We’re in space.”
“Oh, thank God.”
I sighed and unbuckled myself from the chair. I then unbuckled Gaia. I picked her up and carried her over to a security guard.
“When can we go to sleep?”
“Whenever you want.”
“We’re ready.”
“Of course you are. Follow me.”
I followed him into the room an adjoining room. There were 50 berths in it and only 3 of them were occupied.
“One per berth,” the guard said.
“They don’t look big enough for two,” I replied.
“Exactly.”
“Oh.”
I placed Gaia in one of the berths and shut the top. Immediately I heard a psssst noise and the glass top grew frosted.
“She under?” I asked.
“Yup.”
“That was quick.”
“State of the art kind of stuff in here.”
“oh.”
I got inside the berth next to her and shut the lid.
I hope dad and chris didn’t see all that…….
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“Mr. President, we’ve received confirmation that the Colonial has made it into space,” a aide said.
“Thank you,” Taylor Dranell said. He then turned to the group assembled at the table in front of him.
“With all the money that we’ve spent on this project it damn well have made it up there,” a general said.
“We knew it was going to be a success. There’s no way the thing could have failed. Our scientists ran countless simulations and put so much iron and steel on it that I’m surprised that we even have any left in the USA,” his wife, Eleanor, said.
“Yes, and that’s exactly why I thought it would fail. I thought maybe it would be too heavy to even get a fraction of an inch off the ground,” the same general said.
“General Actavius, you were told by all the scientists that we have that it would rise off the ground,” Eleanor said.
“I didn’t believe them,” he said.
“That’s precisely why you are a General and nothing more,” Eleanor said.
“Enough! You two bicker more than anyone else I know. If the public could see you two fighting they would know instantly that you two are brother and sister. Shut up, please. We have other things to worry about,” Taylor said.
“Like what? We launched the fleet! We should be celebrating; not sitting here and wondering what to do next. We have forty-five years to worry about our next step.”
“Actually,” Taylor paused. “We don’t.”
“What do you mean? It has to travel to New Earth! That’s light years away. The only way we could make it to the planet in less time is…”
“That’s right. Our scientists have figured out how to travel faster than light. The colonization fleet will land on New Earth a year from now. Not in forty-five like I’ve told the public.”
At once General Actavius shouted, “Why didn’t you tell us sooner?”
“I didn’t realize I had to, General,” Taylor said with calm. “I’m the president and I hold the right to give information to those I choose. I also hold the right to not share the very same information with those I do not wish to. That has been our way of doing things in this country since it began. If you have a problem with it, get the hell out of here.” He then turned to the rest of the room. “I do not give you permission to release this information to anyone. Not your friends, your girlfriends, wives, or children. I especially mean the press. They can not know that I have lied to the public. Also, they can not be allowed to inform other countries. If China or Russia or, god help us if they do, Canada finds out that we have the capabilities to travel faster than light then we will definitely have a war on our hands. A war in which we can neither afford economically or environmentally.
“Speaking of which, Dr. Clamuer. Do you have any good news for us or our you staying the usually ‘there’s no hope for us’ course?”
“Sorry, Mr. President. We now estimate that Florida will be totally underwater in eight months rather than in a year. It’s speeding up and everything we try to slow it down seems to make it gain more speed. Our time-line for after Florida gets bleak too. After Florida goes completely under then you will see the flooding of coast cities, more mudslides on the Mississippi, and worse hurricanes.
“Thats not all either, sir. In a complete opposite sense, there will be an increase in forest fires in California, droughts on the plains, and harder winters up North. When I say up North I mean Pennsylvania, New York, Maine, and--” the doctor stopped himself and looked at the floor rather than into the President’s eyes like he had been.
“Spit it out doctor,” Elanor said.
“Canada will be taking a bigger hit.”
“Wonderful,” General Actavius said. “Canada will be basically freezing into a large popsicle. See, Taylor, you don’t have to worry that Canada will try and be the number one superpower on Earth. They’ll be…” he paused. “Unless they don’t wait that long. Unless they try and keep themselves alive by invading the United States.”
“Is that possible, General?” Taylor asked.
“Possible? Well, sure. Anything is possible. Likely though? Yeah. I’d say it is more likely than them declaring war on us because we have a scientific discovery under our belt. Though, if they find out about that, they would sooner declare on us.”
“And there is nothing we can do, Dr. Clamuer?”
“Anything that we could have done, we ignored 150 years ago when we first entered the new millenium. I mean, 2150 is not the time the we should be trying to save the environment. We, and I mean the world, didn’t really get serious about it until 2050 and by then, like now, it was too late. No sir, the most you could do to ensure survival was to send a colonization fleet to New Earth. Other than that, there’s nothing we can do.”
Taylor let the doctor’s finished thought echo through the room. “One final question Doctor. How long before Canada starts seeing dramatic climate changes?”
“Honestly? I’d say in eight months, just as Florida disappears. Then again, that number changes constantly and never seems to go up.”
“So you’re telling me we have last than eight months to prepare for an inevitable invasion from Canada?”
“It appears that way sir.”
“General, meet me in my office tomorrow with the heads of all our military. We need to start preparing. Dismissed.”
Everyone got up from the table and left the room except for Eleanor and Taylor. Eleanor turned to Taylor and said, “We can defeat the right?”
“No. Not without using the bomb. And I refuse to use the bomb. The world is becoming too small due to the oceans that the earth cannot afford to let valuable land become radioactive wastelands.”
“Will Canada see it like you do?”
“My guess is yes. They want to live in the United States before becoming popsicles up there and they couldn’t if they made the whole place radioactive.”
“All it would take is one bomb.”
“Yeah, but if I launch one, or if they do, then there will be a counter strike. Then another counter. Then another. And so on. No, I doubt highly if Canada will use the bomb. The only thing is, I have to convince your brother not to bomb them. I know I can’t just tell him not to. He’ll do whatever he thinks is right, even if it ruins us for good.”
“I’ll have a talk with him. What are you going to do?”
“Call the Prime Minister of Canada up. I think we need to have a talk,” Taylor said and got up from the chair and walked out of the room.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laying down in her upstairs bedroom, Bailey thought, Two more days before we move to New York. Two more days with Chris and then...
She didn’t want to think about life without Chris. It was bad enough that she was moving on their three year anniversary, she didn’t want to dwell about missing the fourth or fifth or sixth.
Instead, she looked around her room and saw bare walls where posters use to hang from her days when she liked whatever boy band was popular. She saw the spot where her bookshelf and her books used to be and that were now in boxes at the bottom of the stair, near the front door. Then she saw the closet, where she hid Chris from her parents many times. Then the window ledge, where Chris gave her her first kiss, where he climbed up and down from when her parents were asleep, and where he slept below during one of their first fights. She sighed. It was not thinking about him. She could have completely ignored thinking about him had she not have thought to ignore it.
The doorbell rang and she rolled her eyes. She wasn’t really mad at the person at the door but her mom and dad were off somewhere finalizing the moving plans and that meant that whoever was at the door was making her answer them. She got up and walked down the stairs. She looked out the peep hole then opened the door.
“Chris! What are you doing here?” she said and threw her arms around him.
“I figured I’d stop by and…” he paused, “tell you the good news.”
“What good news?”
“I’m coming with you.”
“What!”
“I mean, that is, of course, if you still want me to. I know you’re parents hate me and everything, but I figured since you invited me then they must be cool with it. Then I went and talked to Theo and he made me realize that I have to run my own life. I can’t sit back and let my Mom and Grandma tell me what to do or stop me from doing anything or seeing anyone. So, yeah. Thats the good news.”
She smiled and said, “You’re rambling, you know that right?”
“Yeah, I do. I haven’t felt this nervous since...probably since leading up to our first kiss.”
“Why are you nervous?”
“I don’t want you to say that I’m not invited to come anymore. I don’t want you to be mad at me because I hesitated. I don’t want to...lose you.”
“Chris, not only are you still rambling but you are now talking as though you’re crazy. I love you, you nimrod. Do you really think that I would stop just because you wanted to stay with you’re family?”
He looked down and didn’t answer.
“I loved you even more when you said you wanted to stay with you’re family. That’s not to say I love you less now, of course. I love you the same. I just knew that you love you’re family and I liked knowing that you would put you’re family before you’re girlfriend,” she finished.
They looked at each other and said nothing, but that was okay because they were both smiling.
“You want to come in?” Bailey asked.
“Sure,” Chris replied. “I have to ask you something anyways.” He walked in and headed for her living room.
“What?” she asked, following him.
He sat down and she sat next to him. “Do your parents really want me to go with you to New York?”
She looked away from him. She didn’t like lying to him and found long ago that even if she wanted to she wasn’t able to. Instead she always looked around when she didn’t feel honestly answering his questions. The problem was, he knew that.
“Do they even know you invited me?”
She looked at him and shook her head.
He smiled and said, “So, they don’t know you want me to go. I kind of figured they didn’t.”
“Why?” she asked. He just looked at her. “Oh, come on. You still don’t think they hate you, do you?”
“No, of course not. I mean, what would ever even give me that impression? Could it have been your father coming up to me a year and half ago, at you’re family christmas party, and telling me that if I didn’t get out of you’re life then he was going to end mine?”
“I asked him about that, you know.”
“Yeah, and?”
“Well, he said he didn’t say he’d end you’re life,” she smiled, “Just that he would make it miserable.” She laughed.
“You think that’s funny?”
“Just a little.”
“Why?” he said, stunned.
“I don’t know. Maybe because he actually thought he had the uh, lets say, authority to tell you to get away from me. Our relationship has always been between you and me. My father has nothing to do with it and if he acts like that he never will.”
“Hmm, you know I always love it when you talk about us like that.”
“I know, that’s why I do it.”
“So, if you’re parents don’t know that I’m coming… then, well, won’t it piss the off, like, royally if I suddenly show up with my stuff?”
“Now, see, that’s where I need to tell you something.”
“Oh, yeah? What?”
“Well, I’m moving. So, our my parents. But I talked them out of me moving with them.”
“Huh?” he said, very confused.
“Okay, my parents are moving to Buffalo, New York. They told me that if I wanted to come with them they would pay for my college and everything as long as I went and lived with them.”
“Okay, I’m following you.”
“Well, I finally talked them into letting me have my own place in the same state as them. I’m still going to college and they are still paying for it, only now I’m going to be living away from.”
“Really? That’s great! I was fearing living with you’re father.”
She laughed and said, “Yeah. So, now I’m moving as far away as I possibly can while still getting the money they promised me.”
“So, where are you moving to?”
“Where are we moving to, you mean?”
“Yeah. Exactly.”
“Manhattan.”
“New York City! Sweet. When do we leave?”
“My parents are finalizing all the plans right now and you still need to pack. So, I’m going to guess two days or so.”
“Okay. Well then, you want to help me pack? Books, clothes, bed, dresser, shelves, there’s so much to do. I mean, I can do it alone, but I wouldn’t mind some help. Maybe I can get Mom or --” he stopped.
“I’ll help, Chris. It’s not like I have anything better to do.”
“Cool,” he said but his eyes were somewhere else.
“What’s wrong Chris?”
“Well, I decided like two hours ago to come with you and I ran from my house to here and…”
“And…?”
“I haven’t told Mom or Grandma yet.”
“Oh.”
“Well, tow days should be enough time for them to get past that fact right?”
“Yeah,” she said, trying to make him feel better. “Of course it is.”
“Yeah, that’s what I thought. Hmm, well, we better get going. I want to get packing and break the news to them tonight.”
“Okay,” she said. She got up and put her shoes on. He reached for her hand and shut the door behind them.
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Bailey pulled the car into Chris’ driveway and turned it off. Then she looked at Chris. He was facing forward, looking at the front door. She said, “Are you ready?”
“What if they hate me for doing this, Bailes?”
“For doing what, Chris? Keeping yourself alive?”
“I don’t think they’ll see it that way.”
“What do you mean?”
“I don’t think they’ll see me as doing this to keep me alive. I think they’ll see me as doing this to be happy proving to them that I’m selfish. Don’t get me wrong, I will be happy if I go to New York with you, but that’s not the only reason I’m going. I just don’t think they’ll understand that.”
“Well, you have to tell them. You can’t just leave without even saying goodbye.”
“Why not? We can leave and never come back. They’ll just think I ran a way.”
She laughed and said, “You’re almost nineteen. You don’t run a way from you’re home. You grow up. They need to understand. You can’t just run because then, for the rest of you’re life, you’ll wonder what they would have said and sometimes that’s worse than knowing.”
He sighed, “I just don’t--”
“I know. No one wants to face anything without knowing the outcome. Just do it. If you won’t do it for yourself then do it for me.”
He looked at her and smiled. He leaned over and kissed her. “What would I do without you?”
“Live in Florida for the rest of you’re life. Which would have only been another year or so.”
He laughed and got out of the car. She rolled up her window and followed him up the walkway to the house.
“I’m not going to talk, Chris. I’m just going to be there for moral support.”
“I know. I have to do this on my own. Mom!” he called when he walked in. “Gram!”
“We’re in the living room Chris,” his grandmother called back.
Chris took a deep breath and walked towards the living room. Bailey walked right behind him but at a slower pace. She really did admire the house but the reason she was walking so slowly was to not distract Chris. She looked at his medals he won from hockey tournaments and looked at the photos of him and his mother on beaches, in front of the Eiffel tower in France, next to the statue of Liberty in NYC, and in front of the White House in D.C. Then she walked into Chris’ back. He was standing in the doorway of the living room and, apparently, her running into him forced him to walk the rest of the way into it.
“Chris!” his mom said, sipping her coffee. “Where were you this morning? I went up to get you for breakfast and you weren’t in you’re room.”
“Sorry, Mom. I went over to Bailey’s.”
“Oh?” she sounded surprised. “You two aren’t fighting any more?”
“I didn’t think that we were fighting,” he said.
“Sure you were,” his grandmother interrupted. “You told us she was moving. Usually after that there’s a fight.”
“Yeah, well, we were the exception.”
“Hmm. So, why’d you go over there so early?” his mother asked.
Bailey knew she shouldn’t be here. They obviously hadn’t noticed her yet which gave Bailey and unexpected glimpse into how Chris’ family really felt about her. His grandmother and his mother both seemed happy when they thought Chris was fighting with her. She went to turn around and go wait out in the car, but Chris’ voice stopped her.
“Well, that’s kind of why we’re here.”
“We? Bailey’s here?” his mother asked, her tone saying she was surprised, annoyed, and strangely happy at the same time. She stopped Chris from answering by saying, “Tell her to come in here. Gram here will get her a cup of coffee and we can all talk.”
Chris went and sat next to his mother, revealing Bailey.
“Goodness, Bailey. Chris is so tall that I didn’t even see you standing there. How would you like you’re coffee?” Chris’s grandmother replied.
“Very sweet, please,” she replied. “Thank you, Thelle.”
“You’re welcome, dear.” Thelle, Chris’ grandmother, said and walked into the kitchen.
“So,” Mrs. Raider said after Bailey sat next down to Chris. “What did you want to tell me?”
“Well, actually I wanted to wait and talk to you and grandma first.”
Bailey watched, with a little bit of hilarity, the color drain from his mother’s face. She knew the next thing coming out of his mother’s mouth.
“You got her pregnant, didn’t you?” Mrs. Raider whispered, the world fear practically written on her face.
“What?” Chris said, his thoughts now becoming jumbled. “No. No, she’s not pregnant. We haven’t even done it yet.”
“Yet!” his mother shrieked.
Bailey watched the scene unfolding before her and tried very hard to keep a smile from her face. Still she felt one creeping up. His mother must have noticed.
“What are you smiling about? You’re the one trying to seduce him!” she yelled.
“No, I’m not.”
“No, she’s not.”
Bailey looked over at Chris and smiled. The truth was that they almost did once. They were making out and suddenly they started to pull clothes off eachother. Before they got too far, he had come to his senses and asked about protection. She had stared blankly at him, amazed that she had forgotten and that he had remembered. She told him she wasnt on the pill yet and he told her he didn’t have a condom with him. They talked for a little while and agreed that, while they believed they were old enough (17) they should wait a while longer. That was two years ago and since then they didn’t even think about it. At least, she thought, I didn’t.
Thelle returned to the living room and gave Bailey the cup of coffee she made. Then she said, “What are you screaming about Sky?”
To return the early insulting voice that Mrs. Raider spoke of Bailey before knowing she was in the house, Bailey said, “Mrs. Raider thinks that Chris got me knocked up.” She stood up and turned on side, still looking at Thelle. “Do I really look that big?”
“Bailey!” Chris said, but he was smiling.
“That’s not funny Chris. Pregnancy is not a game. You scared me half to death over here,” Sky, Mrs. Raider, said.
“You’re the one that said it. No, she’s not pregnant and, as far as I know, she doesn’t even have it on her list of things to do before 25. Do you, Bailey?” he asked.
“I’m nineteen. Going to college at least four years. That brings me to twenty-three. Then I want to get a really good job. Then marry. That’ll be another year. Then buy a nice house and buy a nice car. Another two or three years. So, that’s about twnty-five or twenty-six. Then I want to start a family. So, it’s on my list, but it’s the very last one.”
“Ugh, you both are acting like this is funny,” Sky said.
“Well it is,” Bailey replied. “We haven’t had sex, but we’ve talked about it. Yeah,” she continued after getting a look of shock on both Thelle’s and Sky’s face, “Teens sometimes talk about having sex before actually doing it. We both decided to wait till after we were married. I’m still unwedded and so is he. You two don’t have to worry about a little Chris Jr. Running around here.”
“You’re getting married?” his mother shrieked.
“God!” Chris said and put his head in his hands. “No,