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Poppy Mare
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 Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 6:25 pm Post subject: I Can |
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I can’t sing, or draw or write very well. All I know is that I have another ability that most people just ignore. The power to imagine and create my own life threatening problems.
I can make a tear roll down my cheek when I see a friend die. I can feel the adrenaline rush through my veins as I fly over the dessert with no one to save me. I can feel pleasure, kissing the prettiest boy in the whole wide world.
Okay, so I can’t really do all that. But I can. I just can in my head. During school time I would sit out in the sun and make the whole world dark. I would meet my true friends and enemies and I would know how to fight. I would have wings and fly out of the school, city, my own body, and still be here.
I can make myself the hero, saving my man from the ultimate form of evil. Or I can be the villain, torturing those who oppose my thoughts and ideas. I can make myself look pretty and have all the guys chase after me. I can make the best Whopper you’ve ever tasted.
I can do a lot of things and sometimes I feel awful about it. When I make one of my friends die I do tend to cry, but for some reason there is some for of pleasure from it. When I see them go down and not move anymore, I feel powerful. No, I don’t really kill my friends, just the ones in my head. And I remember how they die and rewind it in my head.
In my mind, it’s like I am the Goddess of my own world. The mental one anyways. Where I can sing, draw, and write.
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| Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 4:30 am Post subject: |
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I <3 it.
I feel the same way. It also goes along with reading-shutting everything out and being absorbed by the words.
Very good descriptions! |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:38 pm Post subject: |
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| It was so brilliant I just dont what to say. :'D |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 4:26 am Post subject: |
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Interesting. I've never seen anything like this before. I can't say I understood it fully, but I liked it all the same. I found one mistake:
Should be desert, unless you're planning on flying over ice-cream, pudding, cake, jelly, etc.
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| I can make myself the hero, saving my man from the ultimate form of evil. Or I can be the villain, torturing those who oppose my thoughts and ideas. |
This bit was really good. Very strong and very true.
There's not much else I can say apart from I liked this and I think you did a really good job. |
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