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TL G-Wooster
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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Nice, but I hate the tear. Make the tissue between the spikes look more veiny - like a bat's wings, and add shading to the spikes. I like his eye and teeth and the smudged effect, but to be very unoriginal and echo everyone else, shading and all would make it even better. ^_^ |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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| erm, it is kind of second-grader ish. kill the tear and make it more angry and not "yay"... rawr! dragons are supposed to say "RAWR!" not *sniff* |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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I wish I could draw like that.  The only thing I can draw (well) is probobly a dot! Sometimes I can't even draw one. I know, it's sad. 
Not only was it drawn well, but it gave a good message. I think that it means that no matter how weird you look, you shouldn't be chained down. Like the Hunchback of Notre Dame |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:00 pm Post subject: |
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| The dragon kinda looks like it's beeing choked, the spines look like rocks (but i suppose it's meant to be like that) ,and it lacks fire in it's eyes, apart from that it's very good try posting it on http://www.elfwood.com/. well done |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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hey  i love this dragon i have a couple of things that i noticed:
- the chain is really rather small. this dragin looks fierce and strong and it would make this picture look so much cooler if the chain was thicker.
-i love how the thing on his neck tore his main thingy (i don't know what it is called) but hey!, it looks cool 
-i know that drawing is hard especially when you are drawing dragons, but practice makes perfect right? so if you try drawing your dragon in 3D then i think that it will really bring it to life
-i am loving the tear the tear just makes the dragon what he is. i can also see that you have a little smile going on with him and i absolutely love that too
i really like this dragon and i think that with the advice i gave you and the advice that the others gave you this dragon would be so tremendous
hope this helps
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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It's a bit flat. I can tell you put a lot of work into it, what with the blending, which takes ages... but try blending some parts to be lighter or darker than others, to create an effect of muscles, etc. Draw some noticeable ridges, and the eyes look a little too human.
But this is really good, too. I love how you actually drew chains instead of ringlets (which is what I do, I just circle with my pencil over and over again). :3 |
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| Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:26 pm Post subject: |
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i know this will sound weird but wow
the emotion in his eyes
the detail you've given him
its like he's standing right next too me
good work
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