I actually wrote this after my Algebra Exam, it was more instinct than concentration.  I really like it, but it needs something.  





A Little Murmur 



In the back of our head,

There is a voice,

but it is hardly a voice at all,

it is more like a whisper,

a murmur really.

It echoes the possibility

of what we should do,

the option we've already

thought about,

but not considered. 

That little murmur,

whether we choose to listen or not,

speaks to us.



On a related topic,

People are always saying,

that they are

'Searching for answers,"

"Looking for the light, the right,"

"Looking for God."

Searching, always searching,

but never finding. 

They say,

"The meaning of life 

is lost"

It's not lost, not really,

you just have to look harder.

And if you really think,

you'll see that it's right there.



You'll find the answer inside of you,

Yes, that little murmur I mentioned,

It's there,

always there, listening, whispering,

telling us what we should do,

but don't have to do.



Yes, people wonder what path to take,

yet subconsciencely,

they know it all along.

They say they're trying to find God.

But if they think,

for once, think,

maybe they'll realize that

Who else,

who,

could have sent that little murmur,

that little conscience,

to us,

but God?

Simple, really. 





I think it might be a bit long, what should I take out?  Reviews are VERY much appreciated, and while I'm fine with spelling/grammar corrections, (i do have awful spelling), corrections on the text itself would be more helpful.  Thank you so much! 





                Jenni