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Poor Imp
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'Course, Jared. ^_^
Raimunda-- Er, have you got anything you'd like critiqued specifically?
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Hello! I'd love some help on Suicide Kills Us All. Mind taking a look?
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Hola! If you could rip this to shreds, please do so. And don't comment on the vampire ending and how cliche it is - I've come to that realization as soon as the words flew from my fingers.
Alliteration!
I have my English Final on Wednesday. FUN. Anyway, it's an entry for the contest JFW is holding, and she extended it... so I have more time. Whoo - hoo! So, will you critique? I have cookies.
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