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Angel of Death
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 Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 4:26 am Post subject: A spin on fairy tales |
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A Spin onfairy tales
To all of my vampire friends out there, this is your time to shine.
Write me a classic fairytale such as Cinderella, Snow White, etc. but incorporate vampires.
Rules:
No rated R entries will be excepted
Be Original, you can change names and title if you want
Make sure characters are recognizable
Have Fun!!!
Form of writing:
I would either take a story of no more than 1, 500 words( If you exceed that five hundred words or so I won't bite you...but I will send you a rainbow LOL) or a narrative poem longer than forty lines but no more than ninety.
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First Place: Three Critiques and 100 points and a star
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 4:19 pm Post subject: Re: A spin on fairy tales |
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A Spin onfairy tales
a narrative poem longer than forty lines but no more than ninety.
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Huh?
Well, i might try. I don't know a lot about vampires, guess I'll have to consult my brother. |
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 5:23 pm Post subject: |
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| OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!! i am so excited for the chance to write about vampires os I will definately be entering something. I already have a bit of an idea of what I will write but i am soooooooooooooo excited!!! |
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Angel of Death
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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Loveable you are right on the nose with this one, remember anybody can be a vampire.
Sohini its a narrative poem with 40-90 lines, its this way because you're writing a story and well you'll see
Good luck to everyone,
Angel |
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| Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:27 am Post subject: |
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Oooh, well I can't pass up a vampire challenge! I'm in!  |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:14 pm Post subject: |
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| I'll try although I'm really new here. It's worth a shot, though I don't believe it'll catch many eyes, though emm does it have to be original like something that follows the road of Snow White or is it acceptable to have a whole new story? |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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Candy Top-
Welcome to YWS,
Yes it has to be original, be creative, change the plot but make sure it is able to be recognized as one of the traditional fairy tales. |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 1:19 am Post subject: |
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| OK, I'm struggling between Beauty and the beast or Sleeping Beauty...I shall be done in a few days I guess. |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm in! |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:16 am Post subject: |
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| vampires are mi amor.... |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Leahweird thanks for submitting your entry. Since today is my birthday, I'm feeling generous. I'm giving everyone one more week to make corrections blah blah blah. Hope its useful. |
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