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Gahks
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| It wouldn't let me leave a blank post, so the above is my opening line. |
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Passion's Killing Floor
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| Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 4:51 am Post subject: |
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| It all started when I went to the bathroom and unleashed the mother of all turds... |
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chocoholic
Give me the chocolate and nobody gets hurt
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| Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 5:18 am Post subject: |
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| You, dear reader, are bout the read the greates stroy of all time after which you will send me numerous letters telling me how much you love and worship me and how you wish you were as good a writer as I. |
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XxxDo
Oh, life..
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 10:33 am Post subject: - |
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Today had to be the most mundane day of Lizzy’s life, she decided dully as she sauntered down the dusty, old, cracked street tiles with her black bag swinging annoyingly against her legs as she took more and more steps in the direction of her boring home where she knew no fun awaited and where she was going to spend yet another unexciting afternoon doing nothing but sitting uninterestedly in her tedious room being bored.
Hmm. I tried. 
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wwjnd
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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| I stood just waiting, waiting like I did in the lunch line for a ham and cheese, God I wish I had a ham and cheese sandwich right now. |
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LoveableLittleSock
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Icaruss
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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| The subtle coffin was dressed with black, thorned roses, that reminded me of myself. |
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eaglefire91
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:06 pm Post subject: |
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| They all thought I was crazy, but no, I was not crazy, and crazy I am not, for if I were to be crazy, I would think myself crazy. |
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Demeter
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| Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:38 am Post subject: |
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| What are you staring at? |
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Reason Invalid
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| "Once upon a time, you were the most idiotic moron for picking this book up." |
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It is only when dissonance plays one will find pleasure in consonance.
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Gahks
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:44 am Post subject: |
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| Your reading of this book shall serve as a dire warning to all those dire people who dare to follow in your dire footsteps. |
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Myles Wong
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The stone he had used to kill two birds with had turned out to be a fragile, expensive, irreplacable fossil.
(I write this one because, in a nervous panic, I actually used it for my creative writing piece in an exam) |
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But enough about me, what do YOU think about me? |
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Logic
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| This book was a book--not a good book, not a bad book, just a book, but then you opened it and I realised it must be very bad. |
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Sir Logic, the puzzle of DOOM.
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lyrical_sunshine
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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| "And then I said, 'Your mom!' Ahahahaha." |
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KaatiieBugg
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| Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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| Once upon a time, someone died. |
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