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This dog is absolutely adorable! Great picture, but you could have made it stronger by working on the lighting so it wouldn't look so flat.
I'm going to come and steal your dog!:p I've never had a dog, but i love them, and i bond with them pretty easily, too bad my mom is terrified of dogs! I've had cats and chicks and birds and fish though!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....so cute, so cute, so cute!!! I'm, like, totally freaking out right now!! Watch me freak out! *freaks out* haha! Awesome, mate.
I like the bars. It makes him look like he's at a shelter and he's looking up at me saying, "Adopt me! Adopt me, please!" haha
I'm going to shteal him. He's going to be gone in the morning....haha. I really, really like this photo. Really cute. Good centering, good composition. The gold is the main attraction, and then it's greay all around him. It's really good. |
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I love this puppy! I want him! Then he can play with my border collies Lad and Scotch! He's so soft looking *pats fur gently*!
But yes, I agree with the others. This is a great photo! It's nice and simple but could easily tell a story, like you could say something on how putting animals in kennels is like putting them behind bars (this isn't my opinion but if you belive that, go for it:D!)
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