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a challenge to friends
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evanrith
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 Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:43 pm Post subject: a challenge to friends |
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| i have a freind that i used to think was very smart which was a misassuption he was logical.and as most of you already know humans cant do things logically if we could we would be like computers.but on the subject of this friend one day we realized that all he did was cover up his lack of usefullness with words. now not all of my freinds think this of him and id be the first to addmite im wrong because its all perspective. but so far nobody has proven this perspective to be wrong and most have come to realize that he doesnt say anything worth hearing just makes it sound nice so here is my challenge and i hope most of you are up to it because i like inteltual converstaions.i want someone to tell me a way that a human can be perfectly logical and still hold true to that human factor |
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First off, welcome to the young writers society! I'm Brooke aka blacktiger3915. Great having you here! 
This was awful. You need to use spell check and learn when to use the right punctuations. You also need to learn how to capitalize, like when using "I" or starting a new sentence. This needs work. Major work. I don't think this is a poem or a story. Well, all I can say is best wishes and good luck. |
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| Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 2:12 am Post subject: |
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| What's with all the random topics sprouting up in this section? Are all these people getting confused? This doesn't sound like some kind of writing, but a discussion. Why not try posting this in Randomness on the Community forums? |
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Not a literary piece. Moved to the lounge.
*moved* |
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| Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:52 am Post subject: |
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| One of my friends is intensely logical, but he has a good eye for reading people. Like, he'll notice things about us emotional people that we won't notice because we're too wrapped up in ourselves. It's weird. So yes, logic can be human! |
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