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The Dying Park
The Dying Park
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It wouldn't let me leave a blank post, so the above is my opening line.

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Today had to be the most mundane day of Lizzy’s life, she decided dully as she sauntered down the dusty, old, cracked street tiles with her black bag swinging annoyingly against her legs as she took more and more steps in the direction of her boring home where she knew no fun awaited and where she was going to spend yet another unexciting afternoon doing nothing but sitting uninterestedly in her tedious room being bored.


Hmm. I tried. Wink

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I could never understand why people didn't like it when you poked them.

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The subtle coffin was dressed with black, thorned roses, that reminded me of myself.

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What are you staring at?

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"Once upon a time, you were the most idiotic moron for picking this book up."

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The stone he had used to kill two birds with had turned out to be a fragile, expensive, irreplacable fossil.

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