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PostPosted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, Suzanne! Invasion of the Penis Snatchers is a bit long, but I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look.

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2008 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Meow to you Suze,

I'd be happy if you could review my first Romance story:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post375066.html#375066

Your opinions will be helpful.

Thanks,

Sohini.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you have the time...
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31019.html

It's short!

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 2:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hullo Ladykins.

I was wondering if I could perhaps have you glimpse this: It's called "What A Disguise Love Is" http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31101.html


Muchas love.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey Suzanne! You give fantastic crits, I've noticed. If you get a chance (no pressure) I'd love feedback on:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31184.html

Thanks! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'd appreciate it if you critiqued this

Thanks in advance.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:53 pm    Post subject: will give food for critique Reply with quote
Um

well

please may you please perhaps maybe if you could review me??

I have 1 art thingy.

And numerous story thingies.

And a blog thingamajig.

It would be ever so nice of you..

Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, Suzanne! Can you review http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post379609.html#379609

Thanks so much!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 7:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey Suzanne!
Can you please critique Speechless ? I'd love you forever Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I know you have a lot to do already, but if you can... It's a three-part story. It's called Tangled Up In Blue, and it's from the Romance Section. You can review the three parts, or just the first one, whatever you want.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31224.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31268.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31373.html

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm locking this until I can catch up on what I have here. I don't want any more added, seeing as I haven't finished a large portion of what I have been asked to do.


I'm just slow - stories take me about an hour a review. You might see me review things that aren't here and wonder, why does she have time to do that but not my thing? 1) if it's a poem, poems take me less time and I can do those a lot easier. 2) Maybe I just don't feel like reviewing yours right now. Razz I promise! Everyone will get their reviews. That's why I'm locking this - it makes sure I get done what I need to do.

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