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Kalliope
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 Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 3:31 pm Post subject: Kalli's Critique Call Center |
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Hello? You are connected to Kalli's Critique Call Center, how can I help you?
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What I critique?
Fiction
I especially have a partial for Romance at the moment, but I will also look at Action and Adventure, Historical Fiction (although I am not a great expert at history) and Other Fiction.
If you ask me to I may also do Fantasy (as long as it's not all elves and dwarfes) and Sci-Fi, but I only have little experience with those, so I'd call someone else for help.
I do not critique Fan Fiction.
Poetry
I am not an expert here, but I am willing to look at your poetry and do what I can to help you improve.
Other
Lyrics - I have a great deal of interest in lyrics and would be glad to review.
Art & Photography - I shall tell you what I think, but cannot promise to be all that much help.
Non Fiction - Only if you ask me to.
Does that answer your question?
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| Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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| I have a story called Anniversary, if you're interested. It's romantic. |
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| Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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Done.
Any other callers? |
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| Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 6:30 pm Post subject: |
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*Poke*
Part One
Part Two
Rip it to shreds?
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| Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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| Finally completed. Any more callers? |
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I'd love it if you could do this. It's long, (the first part is 16 pgs) but I'll give you 50 pts to do it.
www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30959.html |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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Done! I have time now, so if you want a crit you won't have to wait that long  |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: |
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Up!
It's a lyric, and I want it to be awesome, seeing as it's going to be the main track of my musical. |
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