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starrynight89
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 Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 1:04 am Post subject: Need Reviews? |
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Hello everyone,
So I haven't been on yws for a while now because life was just too hectic for the past couple of months but things are beginning to settle down. I'll have finals out of the way soon so I can really spend quality time here. I love to review but do have certain guidelines:
1) I love to read about love, hehe. Romatic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Fanfiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, etc.. I don't provide the best insight for poems and lyrics so, unless you want a bad review, don't request 'em. 
2) Rating: Any
I think that's about it. Bring on the requests! My reviews are usually geared towards characterization. I do look at grammar and plot but those are secondary when compared to the main character(s).
Thanks,
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AWritersFantasy
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 4:21 am Post subject: |
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Guess I'll be the first to ask for a critique. ^_^
Caelestis: Keeper's Throne is a fantasy fiction story/novel I'm working on. It's actually a sequel to my Child of Ashes: Outcast story I was writing, but I decided to work on the sequel as a way to get more background information and ideas for the first story. I only have one chapter up of this story, but I may (or may not, depends) have another chapter up soon. This story doesn't have any reviews yet, so anything you can give would be appreciated. |
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scasha
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:23 am Post subject: |
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Hey
I would really love if you could critique my first two chapters of The Duty:
Chapter One and
Chapter Two
Thanks so much! If you ever need crits, let me know! |
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| Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 7:08 pm Post subject: |
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I would really love it if you read The Brink. It hasn't gotten very many reviews.
Thank you so much!! |
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