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OverEasy
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 Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:30 pm Post subject: Will critique |
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Things I will crit.
Poetry Any kind, but beware I will eat your soul. I am slightly evil 
Fiction Romantic Other and Fantasy are what I am best at.
Lyrics Shock I know, someone that does lyrics!
Art/Photography Will do, but don't expect anything great and profound. I have no idea what I am talking about XD
Things I wont crit.
Scripts I am terrible, I wouldn't want a crit from me on a script.
Fiction I am terrible at criting Sci Fi, since I know little of science. Also I prefer to not do Action/Adventure, it's not really my thing. Historical fiction isn't really good either because I often get my facts mixed up.
Things I am best at
I am really good at reviewing for character development and the basic idea behind the piece.
My grammar is terrible, but I can catch some of it
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OverEasy
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| Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:08 pm Post subject: |
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| Any takers? |
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PenguinAttack
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:20 am Post subject: |
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*takes*
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29607.html
I wouldn't mind if you looked at that, if that's okay. It's a little oldish now, but I'm conflicted about it. ^^
I thought I'd show your thread some love, Tale. ^^
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:35 pm Post subject: |
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Hey OverEasy,
you seem to know something about poetry, so you'd make me really happy if you'd take a look at this:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post366228.html#366228
I think I may need some help. Just drop me a PM if I can return the favor, okay?
Thank you!
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OverEasy
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:11 am Post subject: |
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| done with both |
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:17 am Post subject: |
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Hey Overeasy!
I would love for you to crit on my Chapters One and Two of The Duty:
Chapter One and
Chapter Two
Thanks so much! If you ever need a critique, let me know
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| Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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'Ello
I'd love it if you could critique this story:
www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30187.html
thanks. |
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Kalliope
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| Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 4:55 am Post subject: |
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Hey OverEasy,
sorry to bug you again, but I could really use your help with this.
Thank you!
If there's anything you'd like me to look at just tell me.
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