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Horror? Apocalyptic? Zombies? The viral is like virus. Sounds good, interesting take.
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| Posted: Sun May 04, 2008 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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It gives me the picture of a misty morning in the mountains. Very adventurous.
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 12:04 am Post subject: |
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Makes me think of person and has something to do with their ancestors. Very nice, 8.5/10
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:26 am Post subject: |
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Pretty, makes me think freedom, possibly Civil War or Child Labor story?
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:56 am Post subject: |
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Makes me think of something like riches to rags, or something down that vein.
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:59 am Post subject: |
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I would have to guess a romance that has an important scene near the ocean.
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: |
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*strokes chin while thinking* The tittle seems a little long, (I'm prone to go toward shorter tittles). I might read it, that is if the blurb is intersting.
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:31 am Post subject: |
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Kind of dry. Maybe a story relating to geneology. Perhaps the MC is in search of his or her heritage.
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| Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 4:05 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm... sounds interesting, I might have a look. Sounds like either some emotional journey or a long travel/quest.
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:08 am Post subject: |
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Right away it makes me think there's going to be a chaotic ruler or some sort of evil tyrant ruling the world.
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:14 am Post subject: |
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It sounds interesting. I might look at the back cover, and read the blurb. It sounds like it could be a fantasy story involving woods, or maybe it's about an incident that happened to a character in a forest? The secret? Or maybe there are elves. Haha, It could be a lot of things.
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 2:56 am Post subject: |
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I would definately read the back cover.
It sounds like it's about a woman, probably mid-twenties and single, who has had a lot of troubles - probably lot's of recent death. Maybe she's struggling with her faith because of this? Or maybe there's no God mentioned, but she's struggling to keep going.
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 9:25 am Post subject: |
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Sounds cynical and somewhat hopeful, which is probably the intended tone.
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| Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 2:30 pm Post subject: |
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I'd definetly take a closer look at this one. Makes you stop and think Wait. Isn't that the same thing?
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 3:41 am Post subject: |
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I'm very familiar with the Bible, so my mind immidietly makes me think that it's refering to something forbiden. I'd read the blurb on the back.
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