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Needles and Roses - Chap. 8
Needles and Roses - Chap. 8
by KJ in Advanced Critiques
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Alice I'll claim Sybyla Jane. i am Raph ^_^

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Chris flirts with any and everyone and will be willing to have several short relationships before TN's girl. XD Just a comment. lol.
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I'm ok with that too. Just let me know before hand.


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I think vincent just claimed Arabella. But I'm not completely sure if that's a full relationship, or him being a "womanizer" as he called himself in profile. (^_^ Phindin!!)

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Um, Bella you just completely ignored the content of my post. I know you read it too, because you told me I need spaces between paragraphs.

Usually this wouldn't bother me, it happens, but I waited almost twentyfour hours for you to reply!

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Leahwierd >> I did read it, but with the way the timing was and had been moving, I wasn't sure how to fit it in. I thought it would be best to skip over that spot, for the sake of not letting the timing get too much wierder than it already was. My apologies if that upset you at all, it wasn't meant to. Smile

Also I am editing the first entry to take out the characters who have dropped out.

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I have edited the first entry again.

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Um, I'm totally lost. Someone bring me in?

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