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BigBadBear
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 Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 10:18 pm Post subject: Free Reviews? |
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Please, please, please, please, please send me out of my misery.
I want another blue star. 'Nuff said. Please. I really do.
Gimme your links!
I do:
Everything but non fiction and fantasy. Sorry.
To do:
Done:
JFW1415's two pieces. - They were amazing.
Eimear's Romance - Totally worth critiquing.
Twit's Fantasy - Her best so far.
Aliza's Raincatcher
Kylan's Machinations
Jabber's 12 Shocks of Christmas Pt. 7
Ambercoutlis's Meeting Future Girl
Jabber's The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove
JFW1415's Suicide Kills Us All
JFW1415's Out of Focus
Midnight Gladius's Triple Point Segment 1 & Segment 2
JFW1415's Smiling's a Good Start
Rory Legend's Think Chapter One & Chapter Two
Niccy_V's Scars
Conrad Rice's Mirror, Mirror on the Wall
Sportgurl46's Bruises
PenguinAttack's Singed Finger and Disappointments
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Eimear
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| Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, I'll by all means put you out of your misery.
It's called 'Two for Joy' and it's in the Action/Adventure fiction section.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post362477.html
Thanks in advance, best wishes
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BigBadBear
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| Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 10:27 pm Post subject: |
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A customer already? Dude! Awesome!
I'm looking at it right. Have the crit posted in a few!
-Jared |
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| Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 10:28 pm Post subject: |
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Part One
Part Two
Please? They feel so...lonely. 
~JFW1415 |
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BigBadBear
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:05 am Post subject: |
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Awesome. I have everything up to date.
Please, I'm so bored right now. Pile me high with critiques!!
-Jared |
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| Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 1:30 am Post subject: |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post364505.html#364505
Pwetty please'm? Fantasy, that do you? Ignore the reviews before, that draft's been tooken down, and the chapter that's up is the only one that counts.
Tuchly ma in advance! |
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BigBadBear
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| Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 3:21 am Post subject: |
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Done!
Amazing.
-Jared |
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 4:09 am Post subject: |
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| *is bumping because I want some critiques* |
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 3:20 pm Post subject: |
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Alright... if you wouldn't mind: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30168.html
Thank yo so much! Let me know if there's anything you want me to crit in return. 
~Azila~ |
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:15 am Post subject: |
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Whoa.
I didn't even realize you guys posted this. *is a loser* Anyway, YES! I'm critiquing right now! Thanks dudes!
-Jared |
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:59 am Post subject: |
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Finished all of those. I'm free and bored.
Any more pieces?
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And if any of you fellow writers have time, could you take a look at my portfolio? Nearly anything is horrible and needs to be ripped up. |
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| Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:30 pm Post subject: |
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If you could help me with this piece, I would greatly appreciate it
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29980.html |
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post371598.html#371598
Next chapter of Scavenger... if you wouldn't mind, please Bear? |
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