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(Revised) confusion.
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I want to Critique, (I give very long ones)
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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 7:52 pm    Post subject: I want to Critique, (I give very long ones) Reply with quote
Post away!

I would like to hear anything...

But again; I would prefer poetry or short stories as that's my number one area.

Uhmm.. what else do I have to say..?

I'm a pretty sweet person when I crit but if I just plainly dislike something I won't be kind about it. I'll let you know my opinion.

Please, Please, Please remember you don't have to take my suggestions. Go with your heart when editing and what YOU feel sounds best. However; you may want to look over your crits at least a few times. That's something every good writer should remember.

In exchange for my crits if you had the time it'd be nice of you to review some of my work and perhaps post your comments on it. Although, you don't HAVE to. It's on a voluntary basis.

Also, I love having friends so add me. And, Pm's make me smile so PM me!


So foegt to include a link when you tell me to crit something in your post please.
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Thanks for reading,


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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 1:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I have a song that wants more critiques, would you be willing to do that for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28448.html

I'll definetely add you to my friends.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I have a poem, if you don't mind. Smile http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29783.html

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28832.html

A poem of mine. One of the better ones I've written (though that isn't saying much).

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*waves her hand around and bounces up and down* Me want crits!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30070.html

That's my latest post of the novel I'm writing. Each post has a link to the previous entries.

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