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Poisoned Roses--Chapter 16
Poisoned Roses--Chapter 16

by ashleylee in Romantic Fiction
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do we know what's going to happen on this island, or are we just going to wing it?

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not exactly sure... do we want a plan? I'm fine with winging it, but that's just how i roll... (sorry, i promise never to do that againl Laughing Rolling Eyes) Anyways, what kind of plan do we need? It's full of dangerous plants and animals, and we need a plan to get to Toribrio's.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know.....maybe she hates us and set traps while we were still trying to naviagte the reefs? lol

I was thinking more of the maps. Are we going to, like, try and steal them, and she comes after us, and we come to an agreement that she's coming with us? Or do we try to steal them and fail before we're even out of her place? Or do we not try to steal them at all and come to an agreement first? Myabe a mutiny, like, half of us are all, "Whatever, she's just a fricken girl, and a blind one at that, just take the fricken maps," while others are all, "These maps mean the world to her (no pun intended...haha. ahem) let's just take her with us." I mean, we can't just walk up to her place and take the maps; too boring. Our first meeting with Toribrio should be...um...memorable, I think. lol

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 3:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, so those of us trapped in the pit....how do we get out? How are we going to run into Toribrio?

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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

maybe we can find some sort of tunnel ooh!! dierik could get mad that they are stuck and then push garin into the wall which caves in and wa-la le tunnels!

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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I alraedy had Isabella find the tunnel, unless I am much mistaken.

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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 11:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why would you push Garin?! He's wounded!!! haha. I like the idea though. We have a tunnel already, but maybe we can use that somewhere else......haha.

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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 9:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wait...is the tunnel just an aclove, or does it actually go somewhere? I'm confused.

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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 11:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i think for the sake of us getting somewhere, it eventually will lead to Toribrio's cabin

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PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Currently, Toribrio is hiding in a little crack in the cliffs. But I can have her eventually run out of water and since she doesn't know if the pirates have fallen into any of her traps, she'll try to make her way back to her 'cabin' (i was thinking more of a crude hut, but either works) only to find the pirates already there...? Just shooting off ideas here.

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That could work real well, Maybe. We can stumble into the hut and say, "Hey, cool, she's not here. Let's take the maps and run before she realizes they're gone," Then she comes and is all, "Nobody move! I've got a {insert weapon or threat here}!!" Or something. haha.

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Bella, what can we do with Cap'n and my girl. I'm bored and I want to post something on it. Any ideas?

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You could encounter some of those sprights.....


Um, Prowl? What's wrong with Dierek? I don't know how to react.....haha. Should Garin be affected too? Or is it just touching the goop?

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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe I'm not really sure, everyone else can do whatever they want I just really wanted to do that for some odd reason...

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Bella, what are we going to do with our people??????????????

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