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Forsaken Ch2 part 2
Forsaken Ch2 part 2
by jasmine12 in Other Fiction
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This thread was created on May 11, 2008
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PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 3:11 pm    Post subject: Crime has Tales DT Reply with quote
Here is the DT, it will be updated as reguarly as possible.

Characters
MI6 - Micheal Dunn - Me
MI6 - Carlos Clooney - Vernon
Unit - Dusty Ryder - TNCowgirl
Rus. Weap. Dealer - Ten - Ghostrider
SAS - Chloe Jones - chocoholic
Exremist - Jude - RoryLegend
ASIS - Jack - Billy
CIA - Satika Ferguson - *singerofthenight*

"Bots" - Globally controlled
As of yet, we need far more extremists. Remember, you are allowed two characters so you can create them and just let them be used by other people if you don't want control. If so, say so and I will put them here. As of yet we have:

Alex Valdermore
Gender: F
Embassy: Russian extremist
Rank: Weapons expert
Apperance: Muscular, short black hair and green eyes.
Personality: Likes to joke around, but can be very serious at times.

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Pm people who are really good at stuff like this. Other then that I really don't have anythign. :'(

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I only want control of one person, but I'll create an extremist for somebody else to pick up.

Name: Alex Valdermore
Gender: F
Embassy: Russian extremist
Rank: Weapons expert
Apperance: Muscular, short black hair and green eyes.
Personality: Likes to joke around, but can be very serious at times.

Hope somebody likes her! And feel free to change things about her, this was just my initial idea.

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 10:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I was about to join but I'd like to point out:

Chocoholic: Females are not allowed to join the SAS. Thus Chloe is not realistic.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 6:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Really?! Ok. That's not good. Let's just change that too... can females join M16? I know nothing about this in real life.

Thanks for telling me.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 10:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Yeah, females can join MI6 or any intelligence services! They just can't be in the SAS because it's a combat unit.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Singer, you are the CSI person that my girl is going to sneak in and get on the case. You can be her friend or something. But ya.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 5:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good idea TN.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Aedomir, do you think you could change my character to working at M16? Because, like Firestarter pointed out, girls can't work in the SAS.

And also, you should meet me at the London airport because Chole is flying back to England now.

Thanks.

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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks,

Now can someone post involving my girl so I can post.

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