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The Survivor
The Survivor

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't think anyone is "dissing" it because it's rap. They are making negative comments about it because they don't like it.

Since I don't want to be repetative, I just have one quick comment. Be really careful in your use of words like "nazi." Keep in mind who the Nazis were, and make sure that is really the kind of image that you want to get across.

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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 10:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, loved your poem! I just gotta say, for the people who were dissing your poem...IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT IT'S SAYING, DON'T READ IT!! I, for one, thought it was completely awesome. It got a point across, didn't it? Wink
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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 11:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

C.J. Mustang wrote:
Hey, loved your poem! I just gotta say, for the people who were dissing your poem...IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT IT'S SAYING, DON'T READ IT!! I, for one, thought it was completely awesome. It got a point across, didn't it? Wink


How can we know what it's saying if we don't read it?

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