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 Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:58 am Post subject: puppy! |
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thisss is my pupppy. he is 15 months old. he is a golden retriever and his name is forrest. yes, like forrest gump.
it looks like he is in some sort of a jail, but we were at a softball park and they kicked him out because "no pets allowed" so he had to go behind the fence and the bars are part of the fence.
also, this is a photograph that was NOT edited at all.
i simply took my camera and snapped this shot.
i am more of a photgrapher than a writer.
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thisss is my pupppy.
it looks like he is in some sort of a jail, but we were at a softball park and they kicked him out because "no pets allowed" so he had to go behind the fence and the bars are part of the fence. |
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| Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 2:06 am Post subject: |
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Awh! He's awfully cute. I have a golden retriever aswell. His name is Bailey.
I think the bars in your image kind of add to it. It's a really good picture.
-Kat =]
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| Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 2:19 am Post subject: |
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The bars definitely add to the photo -- could be some sort of representation of kennels and shelters such, no? Like you see in the movies. ^^
And aww. Cute dog. Such a shiny and fluffy coat, too! <3 [/sucker for canines]
Retrievers are so sweet. I wish I had one.
Cute photo. ^^
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| Posted: Sun May 04, 2008 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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This is cute but it's more what I'd call a domestic photo than a stylistic one.
The dog is adorable and his expression is very sweet. It makes a good contrast with the bars actually. And... can I hug him? Seriously, you have a gorgeous pet.
I think that this might have been better if you'd taken it from further back and got more of the dog in the photo. That or perhaps you could crop it to frame his head? I know you said you don't edit your photos but that might look pretty cool.
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 9:27 am Post subject: |
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Cute! Bit big for a puppy though, sa?
Retrievers look so big and sweet... *goes all gooey*
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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| He's handsome. I just bought my dog from the humane society a couple of months ago. She's a German shepard and her name is Akila (Akeelah). I also have a cat, Tiffany, and a turtle, Kacey. I'm sorry I got all off of subject! Anyway, good luck with your puppy!
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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Aww!!
So caute!
I love the bars and how it looks like he's in a jail!
I feel bad though...he's cuter than mine hehe
I love it! *pats puppy*
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| Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 11:02 pm Post subject: |
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Aww... he's so cute. I love dogs... except my own. I really want a golden retreiver.
He looks a bit big for a puppy, though.
I think the photo would look better without the bars, then we could see him more.
Give him a hug from me!
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:30 am Post subject: |
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Wow, it's sooooo cute. I wish I had a good camera when my kitty fell asleep. She sleeps in the weirdest ways. 
But good picture.
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 6:20 am Post subject: |
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:O Your dog's in jail!? Hahaha. Just messing. 
You have a really cute dog.  . I used to own a golden retriever when I was little. Very well behaved dogs.
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| Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 2:14 am Post subject: |
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thanks for all the great comments.
yes, he is big for a puppy.
he is just 15 months, can you believe it!
my dad even said we need to watch his weight and cut down on his servings of food.
haha.
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| Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 8:40 am Post subject: |
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| Sooooo cute
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| Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 3:14 am Post subject: |
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I love the picture! We do have a Post Your Pet Pic thread, let me know if you want the link. Your dogs like...in prison! =O I like golden retrievers ^_^ very good dogs to have.
Cute. ^_^
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| Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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Aww, your dog is adorable! What a sweetheart. I've never had a pet, so whenever people post their cats and dogs I always feel so left out.
I like the bars, I think... they add some interest (not that your puppy isn't interesting). I wish the colors were a little more saturated, though of course since it's unedited it's kind of natural for it to look a little washed out.
Gorgeous puppy!  I want to hug him.
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| So cute. I had a golden retriever up until November--he turned out to have Lymphoma and we had to put him down. He was the sweetest dog in the world. Afraid of everything (the dark, thunder, lightning, the lawn mower, the newspaper...) but so sweet. Give your puppy a hug for me okay?
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