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Sunburnt Thirst
Sunburnt Thirst
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
9/10 Very true. but the colours hurt my eyes a bit. Other wise it would be a ten Very Happy lol you should make another one that's easier to read, coz it's awesome.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
8/10 awesome!

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
10/10. Cute, and very cool. Smile

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
7/10
Thought provoking, but could have been 'spruced up' a little.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
6/10

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
7.5/10
Cute.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
6/10.

It reminds me of The Last Mohican for some reason. Smile
But I like black and white.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
5/10

Kinda soppy but cool transistion effects and whatever.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 10:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
4/10
Um I don't really get it?
But you do so that's all that matters heh.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 11:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Oh hello again!
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
9/10. CUTE!

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 3:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
9/10 Did you know that some schools are teaching that the holocaust was a made up story to create sympathy for the Jews?

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 3:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
9/10. That is so bloody STUPID! How could someone even say that? I wouldn't be able to sleep at night if I had told that to someone. That's sick! Ugh, it makes me sick.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 5:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
8/10
very informative but i can barly read it...

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